Talk:Project Character Art

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Whitestep (W) - Approved
The first cat was made with the new warrior blanks. It's... WHITESTEP! Constructments? Dappledsnow The new  generation. 20:36, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. other than that, it looks great! Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty!

Finchsong - For Approval
Hmm... Criticism? Comments? Mist fire  15:43, October 9, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the mark on the hind leg, the gray marks need blurred as well as the tail. Love leaf 19:33, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well? Frostleaf Thawed before she could blossom 01:51, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Well, make the stripes more of a real tabby pattern, like Bumblestar's (see below). Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Finchsong has darker streaks, not tabby stripes. Mistfire Owl City! 17:24, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

This has to be either archived or approved, this has been up for a long time. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Mistfire/sig}} 05:50, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Just darken the shading a bit more and she'll be ready. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  14:29, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

She isn't really good with me; no ginger cats are. Someone else can work on this. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:26, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

I've taken over. Comments? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  20:53, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good 'cept there's a blurred spot on the lineart for the hind leg closest to us. Other than that, I don't see nothin' wrong. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 21:08, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh! Pretteh! There's a bit of smudged lineart on the tail.  Mistfire Epic Fail  22:32, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Swiftspot (W) - For Approval


Love leaf  17:03, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the black patches slightly darker. Other than that, its really good! Harley Quinn 11:58, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I kinda disagree. I think the colors are fine. Love leaf  13:49, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

It just needs to be a teeny-tiny bit darker. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Love leaf 20:09, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the body looks kinda blotchy.

That's all that I really see wrong with it; just smooth the shading out a bit Sky Storm's brewing... 23:42, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Hikari (Ki) ~ For Approval
I know she's no good, I'll redo it later. Anyway, here's Hikarikit. ^_^

Comments? Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  18:11, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is great :). Blur the shading some more. Creamsplash  The stars will never forget you.  19:49, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her legs and tail and add a little to her wings. Dawnkit of DuskClan Poor little kit. 11:09, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Comments? Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  18:16, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Earpink seems a little too blurred. <font color="#797979" style="background:#86e4e5">Frostleaf <font color="#63c47c" >Thawed before she could blossom 18:19, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Earpink is unatural. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

How so? Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  14:07, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is too purple. It needs to be a salmony pink. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 14:12, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading on the the wings and a teeny-tiny bit on her forehead, where the fur sticks up.

Creamsplash (A) - Approved
Well, I finally got off my lazy bum and made her :). Comments? Creamsplash  The stars will never forget you.  19:49, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Where the brown meets the tan needs to be blurred more. <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 21:13, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

If you could smudge the belly like you did the shoulders and tail, that would be great. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Declined, been around WAY too long! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I just needed some time to work on it. This is not declined >:(. I feel offended.... Ellie says;  Merry Christmas!  22:48, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Happy now? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  01:25, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur or smudge a bit under his left (our right) eye. Sky Storm's brewing... 23:46, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Halloween (Rogue) - Withdrawn
I worked REALLY hard on him - I think he looks awesome!



What do you think? Berrypetal's about to have a litter that looks just like him - reserve your own kitten like this guy right away on my talkpage by 5:00 P.M TODAY! :D <font color="#CLC766FF" style="background:#f5ff66">Violetshadow: &quot;Death of a gentle rose...&quot;  18:28, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

He does look awesome! I am so reserving a kit! Although the back leg has a lot of messy black smears and the front legs could use cleaning up. Loveleaf Happy Halloween!  18:48, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs a massive amount of blurring on the black parts. Also the earpink color looks odd. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  20:40, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

let's Archive this. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I withdrawn it. I know he is kinda....bad. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

What lineart is this?Cardinalfire1234 01:07, February 8, 2011 (UTC)CardinalFire1234

Lightheart (W) ~ For Approval
<font color="Aquamarine" face="Monotype Corsiva" style="background:black">Love <font color="lime" face="Monotype Corsiva" style="background:black">leaf 20:15, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... I can't see any shading or highlights at all. And the stubby tail and scars look sloppy. Mistfire Owl City! 18:01, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

As Mistfire said, its REALLY sloppy work. No offense, but its really bad. The blurred fur is... not supposed to look like that. There is no shading. The right ear looks horrible. There is a lot of blurred lineart, and the tail...... well.... its not very good. Declining. Archiving. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 19:34, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is  NOT  declined just because it may be below standards. You just have to tell Loveleaf over here how to fix it.

Darken the shading, and if you need any help, you can ask me :-).

Yeah guys that is really rude the message above there. Anyways Loveleaf maybe re-do the white patches and smudge them and make sure there is no blurred lineart on the char art  Sand  Merry Christmas 12:35, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Birdpaw, Loveleaf, and Elorisa: I am NOT trying to be rude. I just stated my entirely honest opinion. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm. I say I did my job well. Lightheart is supossed to be slopp, sruffy, ugly and have weird spots. But I didn't shade it, now that I look at it. The tail IS supossed to look terrible. Thats the point. He's neglected and scared. I'm just going to fix shading, but that's it. Loveleaf. (This is really me)

If he's supposed to look scruffy, then you could be... neater about it. the lineart is more messed up than it should be. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the head and belly. Sky Storm's brewing... 20:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The spots are supossed to look like that and he is supossed to look un-neat. Forget it. I'm withdrawling it, because nothing going to happen to it. Not mad, just saying the truth: It is not going to get accepted. <font face="Comic Sans MS"><font style="background:Red; border:2px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Navy; -webkit-border-radius: 10px;"> Loveleaf   ♦  20:50, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I took it over. I darkened the shading.

Loveleaf: Does it still look scruffy enough? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  21:26, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes need fixing. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The spots were supossed to be like that, it dosen't look like him now, but other than that, and the ear, I guess it's fine, although the spots need to be changed back. Sorry. Loveleaf (Forgot to sign in)

'''Reuploaded. '''Tried again. Comments? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  17:25, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sparkleap (W) - For Approval
Okay, here's Sparkleap. I didn't know what color her eyes are, so I made them green. Mistfire Owl City! 22:13, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

She looks good! Her eyes are amber - I just forgot to add that! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 12:38, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry, I just can't get the new version to come up. Maybe I can nominate it for tweak week. Mistfire Owl City! 15:32, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind! Mistfire Owl City! 16:19, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay... now make the shading darker and blur the highlights. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 18:22, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Mistfire Owl City! 18:59, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  20:45, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened shading. ℳĨ₰₮ ₣ĨȒ€ Happy New Year!  16:36, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Sweetsplash (L) ~ Approved
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC) Blur stripes.<font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

And the highlights. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  18:44, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Don't withdraw this one! It's really good! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 21:30, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Waterpaw (MCA) ~ Withdrawn
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes - they are uneven. You shouldn't have SO many chararts out. Please withdraw some. I will make the limit 3 at a time from now on.

I'll get to this in a bit. I know I still seem to have tons of art up, but most of it needs to be archived. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 22:25, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Miley (Lo) ~ Approved
When we approve the loner blanks, I have this charart of my loner, who can be found in the Loners of the Forest talk page. <font color="Blue">You do understand <font color="Blue">I'm going to have to sick my  <font color="Blue">Gatomon on you, right?  13:01, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and I see whire pixels in some places. 4pinkbear 23:46, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

I'm reuplouding this, I've fixed the white pixels and blurred most of the shading. Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  15:25, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Jumpfire (W) - Approved
Hmmmm... not so great. Comments? -- Sky Storm's brewing... 03:04, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Nonsense, he's great! Just make the hightlights more prominent and then it'll be ready for CBA! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 19:36, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Made the highlihgts a little more obvious. Sky Storm's brewing... 20:13, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the ginger and black together. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 18:25, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Why? I didn't make him to be smudged, I made him to look like he does. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 18:46, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Halloweenpaw (A) - Approved
What do you think? Based on the image above, though I'm not sure they're the same cat. Comments? Sky Storm's brewing... 20:08, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

No, they aren't related. He looks great! Blur the smudge marks a tad! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 19:36, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Blurred the smudges. Sky Storm's brewing... 20:12, December 17, 2010 (UTC﻿)

MC and MCA
Do you think we have enough people to vote for MC and MCA? If so, I vote for Dove for MC! Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 18:48, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Well I'd like to be MCA. ℳerry spirit 16:50, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

I vote Mistfire. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 16:53, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I'd like to be one... Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 19:54, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

If you do, we will make you MCA.

Really? That would be awesome. I don't care which one I get. :) Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 23:29, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

I would like to be MC. Mistfire said she wanted to be MCA, and I put a vote for Skydragon as MCA.

Tally:

MC: 

Dove: 1 vote

Mistfire: 2 vote

MCA: 

Skydragon: 1 vote

Anyone else want to vote/add into this? So far, there is a tie for MC, and only Skydragon for MCA. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 13:22, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

I voted Mistfire for MC, not MCA. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 13:58, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

She said she wanted to be MCA, so that's where I put her. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 14:03, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Who else needs to vote? Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 23:39, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

If you can vote for yourself, I vote Mistfire for MC! ℳĨ₰₮ ₣ĨȒ€ Happy New Year!  00:57, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Pollenfox (Q) - Declined....for now.
I'm not darkening the shading, or she'll look like a cat popsicle, 'cause of the shading style I used. Comments? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  15:53, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Why are you using the old blanks? My queen blanks are approved! Change it to the new queen blanks or it is declined! >:( <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 16:43, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

The new queen blanks have lots of extra gray pixels in them, they're too big, and they are jpegs. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  17:30, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

There's nothing on 4pinkbear's blanks that we can't fix. I'm currently working on fixing them. When I get them up, transfer this onto the new blank. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 15:33, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Berrypetal - Withdrawn
Here's Berrypetal. She works out great!

Well, I might not keep her out for long. I don't want to spend forever on this.

Elorisa: The pic isn't that big. In fact, the leader blanks are bigger.

<font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 01:07, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot, darken it, blur the earpink, and add depth to the eyes. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  01:07, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get to it soon, just not tonight. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 01:09, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

I started a second project and withdrawn this. I know I can have up to 3 projects at once but I just don't feel like I can finish it... <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 15:26, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Dawningwater (W) ~ Withdrawn
I like this one! :) I can't add in her second wing, though. Comments? <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 16:45, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches a bit more and add in more shading. Other than that, it's great. ^_^ Shinku  5th of the Rozen Maidens  23:28, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

I know it's a good image, but I don't want to do her anymore. Withdrawing. Mew Mew  Zakuro  22:51, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Morningthroat (W) ~ Approved
I like this one, too! :) Comments? <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 16:45, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

She's gorgeous! Just blur the patches and the shading a little bit, and maybe lighten the ear-pink so that it doesn't come quite as close to her pelt color. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 23:44, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tried to blur patches and shading, and I lightened the earpink some. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 15:23, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! :) Sky Song of the storm... 20:20, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Cluefire (MCA) - Withdrawn
So here's Cluefire, from Pearlclan! Will fix the shading when I can get access to pixlr. (my computer is being stupid) anyway, what do you think? Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 05:01, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed the shading and added chemical stains. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 19:12, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Either add nose pink or darken the nose pink. Darken the silver and black patches. Brighten the highlights and darken the shading somewhat. Make her hind paws ginger. For the cream patches, try #d8b872 for a color. Otherwise, she's very nice! <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 15:28, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

I really wanted to do her, but I'm not liking how she turned out... she's just not speaking to me. I'm not withdrawing her cause of the changes you want me to make, Dove, I promise, but she's just not how I wanted her to be. If someone likes the way she is and wants to take over, that's great. Sky Song of the storm... 20:20, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darkjewel (W) - Approved
Here's Darkjewel! (again, will fix shading when I can get on pixlr) Comments? Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 05:23, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Add more depth to the eyes. 05:45, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Tried to add more depth and fixed the shading. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 19:15, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the silver a little more gray and the blue and purple more black. Otherwise, she's beautiful! <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 15:30, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened the colors. (actually had to re-do her; my computer is messing up. 20:41, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur belly shading.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  14:56, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nightflare (W) - Approved
Here's Nightflare. The flecks are actually different colors, they're just so small that the color difference is... hard to see. Whatcha think? Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 22:52, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Just darken the shading and darken the ear and nose pink. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  17:58, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened shading and pink. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 18:11, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

actuallly, I would suggest making the ear pink a paler, lighter color. It looks too... neon.<font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 16:31, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Made the pink lighter, but not quite as light as before. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 01:43, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the hi-lites.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  14:57, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Wolfwillow (W) ~ Approved
Here's Wolfwillow. I really like how she turned out. Comments? <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 18:04, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Just blur the shading some more. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  18:27, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. Blur the shading, and I'd say she's done. Sky Song of the storm... 20:42, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the scar and then blur it. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:59, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

I'll blur the shading, but I think that the scar should be thin and smudged like it is. Mew Mew  Zakuro  15:10, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkmask (W) - Approved
Here's Hawkmask! Comments? ℳĨ₰₮ ₣ĨȒ€ Happy New Year!  18:08, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! Just darken the shading and add highlights to the wings. Zexion; The Cloaked Schemer  18:49, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reupoaded. Darkened shading and added highlights to the wings. ℳĨ₰₮ ₣ĨȒ€ Happy New Year!  16:41, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! love the mask effect. I think I'd darken the shading and desaturate the ear pink, but that's just me. Sky Song of the storm... 20:15, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded.  Mist eh' Wants a cupcakeh! 01:39, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sharkstrike (W) - Approved
Ugh, Terrible. I sorta like it, but it is still terrible... especially the fins and tail. Comments? <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 15:25, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, but it would be impossible for a cat to hold it's self and back end on one leg. I would suggest altering the tail and front paw that's in the air onto the ground, so it looks like it's dragging it. If you need help, I'll help you. Zexion; The Cloaked Schemer  15:27, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

He's Swimming. And plus, It would take me FOREVER to fix the cat's tail to droop down because I would have to redo most of the cat! :( <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 15:34, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

How's that? Zexion; The Cloaked Schemer  15:37, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think that's great! Thanks, Elorisa! Any more comments? <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 15:47, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

You're welcome. Zexion; The Cloaked Schemer  16:19, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Where the grat meets the white needs to be blurred more. ℳĨ₰₮ ₣ĨȒ€ Happy New Year!  16:27, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

'''Blurred to the max. '''Didn't do much effect... <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 16:46, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. Maybe widen the fins and the leg closest to us just a bit though, right now they look a bit...squished. (no offence meant) Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 01:15, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I highly disagree. They look fine.

Clean up the discolored pixels.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  14:59, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Limepaw (app) - Approved
What'cha think? I kinda like how he came out, specially the scale patches. So, comments? Sky Song of the storm... 20:26, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

He needs shading/highlights on the white, and brighten the highlight on the wing. ℳĨ₰₮ ₣ĨȒ€ Happy New Year!  15:06, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading and the highlights on the white visible better. He is also kinda... pixel-like, on the white parts and around the body. Other than that, I'm impressed! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 21:42, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Fixed the pixelation and added shading. Sky Song of the storm... 20:37, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm... The earpink is too dark. Lighten it. Blur the shading and the scale patches. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 20:06, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lightened the earpink, but I don't want to blur the scales... they shouldn't be... blendable. They're solid. Sky Song of the storm... 20:26, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

There's a big gray patch all around the outside of him.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  15:03, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I know... Not sure how to fix it, but I'm working on it. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 18:19, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Hopefully grey is fixed now. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:04, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Joining
May I join? I'm not too good at making chararts, but I'll learn on the way. <font color="Navy Blue">♥Shinystar♥ The Beautiful Silver Cat 10:00, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'll add you in as a kit. In a couple o' days you'll be an apprentice. :) Sky Song of the storm... 15:53, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Skydragon, only the Leader and Deputy can add in members. I will let this incident slide, and I will also allow Shinystar to be an apprentice early. I am in too good of a mood today to be frustrated!

Just to let you know, that if I am being rude to you at anytime, let me know, and I will try to calm down. I am a good, yet sensitive, admin who can have a temper if something goes seriously wrong. If I am rude to you, be the better person and tell me I am. :D <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 20:16, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry 'bout that. Wasn't sure. I apologize; maybe that should be put in the rank descriptions so that mistakes like this don't happen again? Sky Song of the storm... 20:29, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Would I be allowed to add in members? Sexy Panty Gothic Stocking  22:10, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Fox (To-Be) ~ Approved
Check it out! It's the To-be of the Tribe of the Shining﻿ Sun, Fox with Bushiest Tail, or just Fox. Any comments? Sexy Panty Gothic Stocking  22:09, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

No-one's commented so would this be considered approved? Sexy Panty Gothic Stocking  20:30, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Anyone there? Sexy Panty Gothic Stocking  22:28, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, either brighten or add more highlights, make the earpink more reddish, and smudge it into the ear. <font color="Magenta" >☯Maxine: <font color="Black" >Your Cutest Nightmare☮ 22:48, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded blurred shading, added and brightened highlights and made the earpink more hot pinkish. Sexy Panty Gothic Stocking  23:25, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

So? How does she look? I don't belive in coincidence or luck  I believe in Destiny  19:10, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less neon, add a highlight to the haunch, it looks bare. Otherwise, looks great! Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  19:30, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:26, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added highlights to the haunch, blurred shading and I lightened the earpink. I don't belive in coincidence or luck  I believe in Destiny  16:51, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  17:00, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Rockclaw (W) - For Approval
This sucks. Comments? Demyx; The Melodious Nocturne  02:02, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, it looks good! I&#39;m Still Phoenixfeather13! 16:11, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Good! Just make the earpink a more mauve pink color. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:26, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Leafbreeze (W) Approved
This my first one, did I do it right...? <font face="Vivaldi"> Leaf breeze   16:33, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

First of all, I didn't even let you in Project Character Art. Second, you are using the deputy blanks, no the warrior blanks. And, third, you added no shading or highlights. Fourth, and finally, you didn't put it on the page right. Declined. I am sorry if I sound mean. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 18:22, January 11, 2011 (UTC)It isn't perfect. Everything is blurred to the MAX! I understand that Leaf was just confused about how this project works. So, to make it up to her, I made this. Also, I want her opinion first before anyone else comments. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 15:51, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

I took over. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 16:02, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

It's crosseyed. ℳĨ₰₮ ₣ĨȒ€ Happy New Year!  23:50, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

It seems that way, but its not. It's staring straight ahead. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 00:53, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Its true, if you zoom in, its not cross-eyes anymore. By the way, I really like it, thanks alot. (Am I allowed to comment...?) Confused, as always- <font face="Vivaldi"> Leaf breeze   15:07, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Everyone in the project can comment, Leaf. Anyways, CBA? <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 20:49, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

What does CBA mean...? Anyway, if you can, I've always thought the eyes to be a bit more of a darker green, rather than the apple green is it now. Its sort of like the green of the "Leaf" in my signature. Don't even think about it if you can't, its really not a big deal at all. You mst have gone though some work to do thihs, and I don't want to be inconsiderate. <font face="Vivaldi"> Leaf breeze   22:43, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

CBA means 'comments before approval'; it gives members 24 hours to comment on the image before it is approved for use on other pages. Sky Song of the storm... 23:30, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, that makes sense...I think. <font face="Vivaldi"> Leaf breeze   23:50, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Shokkipaw (A) - Approving
Comments? Demyx; The Melodious Nocturne  14:42, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink on the left ear slightly bigger, and there is some blurred lineart on the legs and by the vine. Other than that, it's really good! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 14:59, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  15:39, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur teh shading a touh more. Other than that, it's even better than before! :D <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 16:00, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  16:06, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the collar thicker. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:26, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, Mist, I would say it's fine. I think it's ready for CBA! <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 22:37, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

Säikähdyspaw (A) - Approved
Comments? Demyx; The Melodious Nocturne  14:42, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Love. It. Just give him some earpink. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:26, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Pondstar (L) Approved
What'cha guys think? Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:59, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more natural...blur the eyes a tad (the highlights are unatural without blurring) <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 12:47, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:04, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

When I meant to make the earpink natural, I meant make it a paler pink. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 15:11, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ohhhh...  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  15:10, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

I like the other color better, personally. This color is too pale + bright for a gray cat. Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  15:18, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tila bit mre blue. It's too gray to be blue-gray. The color #4b4b76 woud be a good idea. Mew Mew  Zakuro  18:38, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Shinystar (L)~For Approval
Here is Shinystar, my firsts charart. Comments/critism?<font color="Navy Blue">♥Shinystar♥ The Beautiful Silver Cat 02:27, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and slightly smudge the stripes. Add massive shhading and highlights, And, not to offend your in anyway, the eyes sorta creep me out. Make them touch the bottom of the charart's eye lineart. Add shine and depth in the eye, make the earpink much lighter, blur it, and then it should be good. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 10:43, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not offended or anything. I was sure that I would recieve critism for my first charart. I will do it later. <font color="Orange">Phoenixsong ♥ A sweet phoenix's song♥ 02:35, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm...needs some shading and the ear pink looks off, but the eyes remind me of Weegee. Phoenixfeather13--Blazing Through Winter 16:18, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Tai (L) - For Approval
Eh. Comments? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  22:36, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Looks pretty good, but blur the shading a little near the neck and tail so it looks a little more natural. Phoenixfeather13--Blazing Through Winter 00:35, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Tai looks beautiful! As Phoenix said, blur it a tad. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 12:41, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  14:41, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Much. Though it looks a little off near the tail. Phoenixfeather13--Blazing Through Winter 14:45, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

This looks beautiful, Elorisa! Just smear the white around some. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:00, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  00:25, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Much. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  00:27, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Goldenwish (W) -For approval
This is my first one, I've been told that apprentices are allowed to post. Hope I did alright for a beginner! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   00:18, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

It's beautiful, Leafbreeze! In fact, all it really needs is the golden patches to be blurred just a tad, and earpink, too. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 12:37, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the shading, make the highlights brighter, and it looks sorta crosseyed. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 14:58, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I've reuploaded the image. Oh, that means so much to me from you, 4pinkbear! Does it look better? I did what I could about the highlights, but it's difficult to tell since she's motly white. I fixed it's eyes, and just zoom it on your computer and it's not cosseyed. I had alot of fun making her! I'm excited to make more. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   21:36, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I say its going under CBA! It's really good for a beginner at chararts! <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 15:19, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

I agree! It looks amazing! Awesome job Leafbreeze! Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 18:15, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, thank you, Sky! I tried my best! Does that mean I can put it on her page now, 4pinkbear? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   20:19, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

You're welcome! :) You can prob'ly put it up tomorrow after CBA gets over with, unless 4pinkbear says otherwise. Again, amazing job! Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:27, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

I'll start working on another one, then. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   20:30, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the face hi-lite.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  14:55, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Mentor Me!
Hi. I would like to apply for a mentor in the ways of character art making. I even made a cat to show you guys what I can do; hope you like it! I would really like to make more for more cats!Cardinalfire1234 00:34, February 5, 2011 (UTC)CardinalFire1234 45

I can mentor you Cardinalfire :-3. Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  00:49, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Er...I'm sure 4pinkbear has to decide who's an apprentice and who's not. Phoenixfeather13--Blazing Through Winter 00:52, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I am deleting the image, for it is unessecary. You can be mentored by Skydragon16. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 01:56, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hi Cardinalfire! Nice to meet you. :) Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 18:17, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Can I add Cardinalfire to the list of apprentices, 4pinkbear? Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 22:06, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Tigershade (W) - Withdrawn
Eh... not one of my best works. BUT, I am quite impressed with him. I made this a while ago and forgot to post it. I thought...well....since he died...he deserves a page and charart.

Quick notes:

-Everything blurred to the point where I can't blur it anymore



Smudge where the black meets the brown on the paws.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  15:11, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

I have a Thrushwing picture as well... but it isn't on this computer. I will post it later.

-<font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 15:02, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't he supposed to be dark brown? Darken him. Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  15:04, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well, he is mottled. I just forgot to mention it. I will add darker, mottled patched to him. Plus, I like his caramel color better. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 15:10, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, but it doesn't look too natural near the paws and belly. Blur it a little. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 22:14, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Phoenix, did you see my note at all? EVERYTHING is blurred to the max.

Ah, forget it. Its not gonna be approved. Withdrawing. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 23:04, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ack, sorry! Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:16, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Don't withdraw it! He looks really awesome! Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 18:36, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

I can help you, if you'd like. Mew Mew  Zakuro  13:43, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

I do not want help, Dove. But thanky you for the offer. I think he looks perfect the way he is, but nobody seems to notice. I DO NOT want anyone to take over this. I am gonna just keep him withdrawn. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 21:38, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Chararts are supposed to get CRITISIM, to make them better. If you don't like that, then don't post them, 4pinkbear. Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  00:27, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I KNOW that, Ellie. I am still keeping it withdrawn and I don't want any help with him. I may redo him myself later on. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 14:00, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thrushwing (W) - FA
My best by far.



Yes, the shading's blurred to the max. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 23:04, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

I really love the eyes, they're perfect! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:37, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks amazing! I agree with Leafbreeze, the eyes are really cool. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 18:34, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks very good. ♥Mew Mew Phoenix feather!♥  22:48, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well, nobody's commented since... 2 days ago, so I will go ahead and approved it. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 11:30, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Projects
I know I'm not on this Project, and I probably never will due to time constraints, but a lot of projects on this site have been approved now, and there are a lot more cats waiting for someone to create a charart for them, such as Roseflash, Silentstrike and Zoey. Plus, Loveleaf's disappeared, and that puts a strain on things. So, could I be something like a helper on here? Like removing projects from the list when they're completed? Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 22:38, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Um... you can be a helper...but we NEVER will remove projects! <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 23:05, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Um...no, that's not what I meant. The Project list on the Project's front page is a little cluttered up. For the page where we discuss projects, I think it needs to be archived. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:18, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

SunriseFeather(W)-For Approval
Kay, here's my 1st character art as an apprentice: Hope you guys like it!Cardinalfire1234 23:10, February 6, 2011 (UTC)CardinalFire1234

Mew Lavenderwolf (W) ~ For Approval
Fail shading. Can someone help with that. Otherwise, comments? Mew Mew  Zakuro  23:19, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks a little...dark. I can't tell that well where the eyes come from, though the tail looks okay. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:22, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened her a bit and fixed her eyes. She's supposed to be dark gray, though. Cansomeone help with blurring the shading. I'm not sure if the new image is up, though. Mew Mew  Zakuro  23:28, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Er...no, I don't think it's up. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:32, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

It's up. I'm not lightening her. She's dark gray, and this is dark gray. Mew Mew  Zakuro  23:36, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, it looks a little better. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:40, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think the tail she be a more purplish-grey. Like this:

Use it if you want. This is only a minor tweak/suggestion. Mew Mew Ichigo I'm here to protect the Earth ~nya!  16:15, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Not to offend you, Dove, but...Destiny-san did make a pretty good one above. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  22:26, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Mew Puddingpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Her tail wasn't as good as I thought, but comments? Mew Mew  Zakuro  23:19, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it a tad more near the tail, if you can. It looks fine, otherwise. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:24, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Mew Mew   Zakuro  23:36, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Better. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:42, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten hi-lites.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Waterpelt (W) - For approval
Darker fur is much more difficult than white fur! I worked harder on this one than my last one, I hope it looks okay! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:31, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks awesome, Leafbreeze! Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:33, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, thank you so much! I'm pretty relieved that it's not as horrible with the shading as I'd thought it would be. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   22:49, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Could you fix this font? Anyways, looks real good, but ya need to blur the shading a bit. Keep up the good work! Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 00:13, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and fixed the font! Does it look better? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:01, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for fixing that. :) Yeah, looks better, maybe blur it just a tad more if you can. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 00:13, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

It looks good. Like Sky said, blur it a tad more. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 12:58, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded...better? I couldn't do much, but I did what I could. How do I know when I can put it on her page? 4pinkbear hasn't said anything yet... <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   18:33, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Better. You can put him on his page after CBA. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:04, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur EVERYTHING.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did what I could as not to mess up the rest. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   21:38, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

ShockSpark(D)- declined
Okay! Here's ShockSpark; DANG! She was REALLY hard to do!Cardinalfire1234 00:06, February 7, 2011 (UTC)CardinalFire1234

She looks good! Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 00:16, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Your pics look good, Cardinalfire, but they need to be put in as full size, not thumbnails, 'kay? And as for Cardinalfire's being a kit, they've been a member for more than two days and have been assigned a mentor (me) which I'm perty sure is the requirements as listed on the project page for apprentiship. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 15:47, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

I apologize most sincerely to all concerned if I am incorrect. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:06, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

OakPaw(MCA)- declined
Hey again! I did OakPaw! Cardinalfire1234 00:48, February 7, 2011 (UTC)CardinalFire1234

GrassFrost(MC)- Declined.
WHEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! I'm doing a lot today! Here's GrassFrost:Cardinalfire1234 00:50, February 7, 2011 (UTC)CardinalFire1234

Sorry if I'm offending you or anything, but kits aren't allowed to post art. <font color="Orange">Phoenixsong ♥ A sweet phoenix's song♥ 03:03, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

The name is Grassfrost, not GrassFrost. And the cat above is supposed to be Oakpaw, not OakPaw. Okay? <font color="Orange">Phoenixsong ♥ A sweet phoenix's song♥ 03:05, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I always have capitalized those things. And FYI, My mentor is Skydragon:)Cardinalfire1234 04:40, February 7, 2011 (UTC)CardinalFire1234

Are you BACKTALKING an ADMIN, Cardinalfire!? You are a KIT. You cannot post yet. You will recieve Skydragon as your mentor now in 1 week. I think you can wait. Also, you should know that ANYBODY can give critism and comments to ANYBODY'S work. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 20:05, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sure Cardinalfire didn't mean it that way, 4pinkbear...Perhaps thay added the smiley at the end as not to sound rude. I made a charart of Grassfrost a couple days ago, do I needto post it for approval since this one was declined? I was just wondering, it's not a big deal. I'm having alot of fun making these, thank you for letting me join! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   22:43, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Thankyou Leafbreeze. I wasn't trying to be rude, 4pinkbear. I wasn't trying to be unkind to ShinyStar, and I sincerely apologize if that's true. I guess that IS how it came off as :/ I was just apologizing for my capitalization issues, not to a defiant idiot, because I have met quite a few of those, and they're really annoying. I have re-read the rules and concequences ( multiple times now, accually) and I would like to ask you; Which one of my character arts can I not reapply as? One of them? All of them(oooh, that would suck!)? Two and a half? I thought I could post when I got a letter from my mentor telling me that I was their apprentice, so I took it as a go for it. I guess that was a mistake. I really am sorry.(p.s.I left you another apology on your talkpage)Cardinalfire1234 23:28, February 7, 2011 (UTC)CardinalFire1234

Cardinalfire, the capital thing is officially bugging me. The prefix is the ONLY thing that is capitalized, and not the suffix. Therefore, proper warrior names are for example, Toad l eap, and not ToadLeap. And when you become an apprentice, you can have up to three chararts for approval.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Everyone, it's not Cardinalfire's fault! She's a new member, and isn't aware of all the rules! I suggested her to join from Warrior Cats Wiki and those rules must be different. She just didn't understand, but I'm sure she does now because the message form 4pinkbear above explained some of it. She bravely apologized and is now aware of the rules and etc. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   21:28, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Mew Mintobreath - Declined temporarily
Major fail. I hate the shading and the eyes. On the plus side, I did the wings pretty well, right? But I'll redo them some other day. If some one could do it instead, then that'd be a big help. Comments? Mew Mew Ichigo I'm here to protect the Earth ~nya!  16:18, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks nice, and I like the eyes. I like the purple wings too! :) <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   16:40, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

It looks good. Just blur near the wings. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 00:06, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Not to offend you, but this has to be declined, because it is too small. If you can redo it in 2 days, I will take off the Decline and put it back up for approval. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 00:09, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Personally, I would blur the shading more. Other than that, it is SOOOOO cool!Cardinalfire1234 01:02, February 8, 2011 (UTC)CardinalFire1234

Mountainwhisper (W) - For approval
I think I've done better, but he's better than he could be. I had a tough time with the shading on the white on his back. I hope he look's nice, he's one of my favorites! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   16:53, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

He doesn't look nice, he looks awesome! Darken the shading on his head a bit though, and blur the white just a bit more. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 18:31, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

I've reuploaded it. Thank you, Sky! I'm excited to see what 4pinkbear think of him and Waterpelt! Does it look better? Speaking of Mountainwhisper, do you want to roleplay him? No one else has asked yet, and I like how you roleplay Foreststep. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   19:06, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, the shading looks better, it just needs blurred a bit, and there's a white line under the ear pink on his right ear. And sure, I'd love to roleplay him! You're doing great! Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:00, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Oops! I forgot to blend the right ear! Thanks for pointing that out, Sky! I know it still has it there, but I swear that in my pictures file it's different! Why didn't it change even though it's be reuploaded? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:07, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno, Leaf. However, you did pretty good on this. That, I can't deny. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:36, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Really? Thank you, Phoenix! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:40, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

No problem. Again, just blur the shading near the right ear, and it looks amazing. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 00:00, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll do hat tomorrow, I need to go. Thanks for you comments and support! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   00:03, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I blurred the shading near his ear, finaly got the white line on his ear to disappear, how does he look? Can I put him on his page? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   18:37, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. :) You can put him on his page after he goes through CBA. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:05, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

And pinkbear has to post a comment below saying it's up for CBA before I can put it on the page, right? Okay, thanks! I'll wait. :) <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   22:37, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all shading and hi-lites.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   21:40, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Mew Lettucewave (W) ~ For Approval
Here's Mew Lettucewave. The antennae are supposed to be white, but I've made them grey so they can be seen. I think I did better on her than Mew Mintobreath. Comments? Mew Mew Ichigo I'm here to protect the Earth ~nya!  16:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the burn tool wasn't working so I had to draw in all the shaded areas. Mew Mew Ichigo I'm here to protect the Earth ~nya!  16:58, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, wow, you've done a wonderful job on the antennae! It looks wonderful, I love it! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   18:16, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

You did fine, though as soon as possible, and I mean this in the nicest way possible, try again on it so it doesn't look...blurred. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 22:18, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Cricketspark (W) - For approval
All the others I have posted on here are approved, so here's Cricketspark! Prob'ly too dark, huh? Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:19, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah...too dark. No offense, Sky, but I can't see the mouth or where the outlines are. The earpink looks a little bright, but it looks fine otherwise. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 22:15, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''No offense taken Phoenix! I thought she might've been too dark. Better? Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:06, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Much. Though I still can't see the mouth. Looks good otherwise. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 22:25, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Good, but too dark.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Redriver (W) - For approval
And here's Redriver... I kinda like her, though I think I mighta messed up on the ears. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:34, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

No,no! She looks so cool! Wait, I am allowed to post my comments on these things when I'm a kit, right. If not SORRY!Cardinalfire1234 21:37, February 7, 2011 (UTC)CardinalFire1234

Blur it close to the ears. It looks fine otherwise. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 22:16, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:09, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

The line near the ears. Otherwise, it's amazing. ♥Mew Mew Phoenix feather!♥  22:42, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

What line near the ears? Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:20, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind. It looks awesome. ♥Mew Mew Phoenix feather!♥  21:38, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

She's pretty good, but looks a little crosseyed.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Moonpelt (MC) ~ For approval
I personally think something's wrong with the short haired female warrior blanks. While I'm editing it, it'll sometimes just start to go blurry. That's why my previous chararts with them look odd. Could someone please fix them for me? But, for now, here's the MewClan medicine cat. I actually really like this one. Comments? Mew Mew Ichigo I'm here to protect the Earth ~nya!  17:30, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

The image is too small. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 21:40, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

I've made it 200px, though it might look a bit fuzzy. Mew Mew Ichigo I'm here to protect the Earth ~nya!  21:49, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. ♥Mew Mew Phoenix feather!♥  22:27, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Grassfrost (MC) - For approval
I made this since Cardinalfire's was declined...I hope she looks alright. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   22:02, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! ♥Phoenix feather!♥  22:16, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Phoenixfeather! I'm pretty satisfied with the eyes, I was worried they wouldn't look okay. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:42, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Give her hi-lites.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I gave her highlights, but the don't show on her fur color! Any ideas on how to fix that? If you want to see the highlights, tip your screen back... <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   00:41, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, this should be declined because you already have three chararts up for approval.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  15:00, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

This is my third. Goldenwish was my first ever, and was put up for CBA by 4pinkbear. Waterpelt, Mountainwhisper, and Grassfrost are the only ones I have now that aren't yet approved. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   21:21, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. ' <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   21:41, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedshadow (MC) ~ For Approval
Here's Spottedshadow, the SeaClan meddy cat! Comments?  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  18:11, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

There are a few white pixels on the art. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  18:15, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Dovepelt (W) ~ For Approval
And Dovepelt! Comments?  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  18:11, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darkfire (Alt) - For Approval


This is Darkfire in his worst form. I in fact went ahead and blurred everything. I added a glow around him because he, well, isn't entirely cat, is he!? The glow is supposed to look solid and is supposed to look....sloppy. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 21:13, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, it looks pretty good, 4pinkbear. The glow isn't half-bad. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  21:14, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I know this is weird, yet it's still a contructive crit. The mouth looks as though smiling, yet if this is his worst form, shouldn't the mouth be in a manaic frown or something? It's kinda looks happy.... <font color="blue" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">♥Love <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf♥ 21:44, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the stains on his pelt aren't just from the blood from killing helpless cats, It's also from the stress of trying to absorb every cat. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 21:26, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry placed my post before yours <font color="blue" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">♥Love <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf♥  21:45, February 13, 2011 (UTC)