Warrior Cats Roleplay Wiki talk:Character Art/Declined 1

Leader Blanks ~ Declined
Kay, my other ones were TERRIBLE, so I changed it. Constructive criticisms? Cherryfur123  Just stick with the script... 21:52, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Add in the other blanks. When you've done that, thicken the lineart around the eyes. -- Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 18:49, July 24, 2010 (UTC)

We already have our leader blanks sorry  Sand  It's not your fault Texas 19:30, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Male Longhair Deputy ~ Declined
I made the tail slightly fluffier. You do understand I'm going to have to sick my  Gatomon on you, right?  13:04, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think the other blanks are just fine.

Shorthaired Male Elder ~ Declined
This needs cleaned up. You do understand I'm going to have to sick my  Gatomon on you, right?  17:00, July 26, 2010 (UTC)

This is pretty good! Just add in the other blanks, and I will see if I should approve them or if I should see if we can fix them! 4pinkbear 11:35, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Shadowpaw (A) - Withdrawn
This is Shadowpaw. He is gonna be used in future RPG, and roleplayed by me. It is kinda difficult to shade him, though, but the highlights and shadings ARE there. The Darkest Shadow 12:53, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Since no one is commenting, I will have to approve it through CBA if no one comments 'till tommorrow morning. I will also be starting school tommorrow, so I won't be on as often. ☯Icefeather Night Whispers ☯ 23:07, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Nobody? Oh well, I will wait 1 more hour. If not, It will be approved. ☯Icefeather Night Whispers ☯ 19:11, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add more shading, blur the white flecks, and make the earpink a more natural color. 20:01, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... I am gonna withdraw this for now. I will repost it with some changes maybe in a week, or less, whenever I decide for one of my she-cats to give birth to him. :D ☯Icefeather Night Whispers ☯ 19:08, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Apprentice Blanks - Declined
These are mine too, don't want WCW using them, now would I? 20:48, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

I like the original apprentice blanks better, honestly. ☯Icefeather Night Whispers ☯ 20:51, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Me too. they seemed so much more... I don't know, graceful.'  Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty! 15:57, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. The old blanks were really good. Dappledsnow The new  generation. 23:10, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, these would be really good for kit blanks! Cardinal fire My fluffy yellow cake!

Mistfire (A)- Withdrawn
Here's Mistfire-err...Mistpaw. Since Mistfire warrior has been approved, here is her apprentice charart. Comments? Mist fire  17:53, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, and, question. am I able to make chararts for cats that are not my roleplay cats? Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty! 18:19, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the white parts a bit, smudge them, and blur them and the shading a bit. Also, you can do other chararts, they don't have to be just for your cats. Just look at Dapplepatch. She's roleplayed by Destiny but her charart was made by Elorisa. Dovesong or <font color="Olive" style="background:Silver">Songdove 18:52, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to withdraw this so I can do the Finchsong pic. I'll come back to it later, though. Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty! 01:50, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Silversoul (W) ~ Declined
I'll re-do it later, but here's Silversoul. Right now, in rp, she's a queen, but here's her warrior pixel. Any questions? ...Besides that there's a ton of white pixels and it is crap, I realise that. Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  18:26, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Its too small. <font color="#000000" style="background:#FF0000">Harley <font color="#FF0000" style="#0d0d0d">Quinn 11:57, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

Should we decline this? It's been up here for a while and nothing's been done. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:32, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Prey Hunter Blanks ~ Declined
For the tribes. <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 22:25, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Make them bigger. But these are ... AMAZING!!! <font color="Orange" style="background:Black">Halloween <font color="Silver" style="background:Black">Sleepy Hollow <font color="White" style="background:Black">Woman in White 22:51, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Don't take this the wrong way, but the faces are too big. The eyes are droopy, and the paws, legs, and such are short, thin, and they just don't look right.<font color="#000000" style="background:#FF0000">Harley <font color="#FF0000" style="#0d0d0d">Quinn 20:45, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

They were orginally kit blanks, that's why they look as they do, but then we got new ones. I'll tell you what I'll make them bigger, and I'll fix the legs and eyes. But that's all that I'll do hold on. <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 19:21, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

My Computer won't let me upload them, I have to use a gallery! Sorry! <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 19:21, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I got them! <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 19:29, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Err... the legs and tail need to be longer, still. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:06, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

The legs and tail need to be longer, and the head nees to be a little smaller. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Rogue Blanks - Declined


I redid the rogue blanks because the anatomy was seriously off. And they creeped me out. Comments? Elorisa ♥ Nic  23:54, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

I love :D  Sand  BOO...Trick or treat 00:04, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

They are nice, but my rogue blanks are really good. They are not creepy! Yours are great, too, but I spent A LONG time doing these blanks:

<font color="#000000" style="background:#FF0000">Harley <font color="#FF0000" style="#0d0d0d">Quinn 19:05, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, I probably spent a longer time on these, ust trying to get the anatomy at least a little correct. Anyway, on the only ones, the anatomy was seriously off, making them look a litte...weird. Elorisa ♥ Nic  20:06, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry 4pinkbear. But I agree that these look awesome, not that yours dosen't, of course (see my blanks above XD) but maybe a change isn't that bad. <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 21:14, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

See if you can make the blanks more catlike. They kind of look like wolves. Mist fire  03:11, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Er... since you are not fixing these, its declined

No it's not, my art comp has been down. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  22:48, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Pollenfox (Q) - Declined....for now.
I'm not darkening the shading, or she'll look like a cat popsicle, 'cause of the shading style I used. Comments? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  15:53, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Why are you using the old blanks? My queen blanks are approved! Change it to the new queen blanks or it is declined! >:( <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 16:43, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

The new queen blanks have lots of extra gray pixels in them, they're too big, and they are jpegs. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  17:30, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

There's nothing on 4pinkbear's blanks that we can't fix. I'm currently working on fixing them. When I get them up, transfer this onto the new blank. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 15:33, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

ShockSpark(D)- declined
Okay! Here's ShockSpark; DANG! She was REALLY hard to do!Cardinalfire1234 00:06, February 7, 2011 (UTC)CardinalFire1234

She looks good! Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 00:16, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Your pics look good, Cardinalfire, but they need to be put in as full size, not thumbnails, 'kay? And as for Cardinalfire's being a kit, they've been a member for more than two days and have been assigned a mentor (me) which I'm perty sure is the requirements as listed on the project page for apprentiship. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 15:47, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

I apologize most sincerely to all concerned if I am incorrect. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:06, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Phantomheart (W) ~ For Approval
Man, this guy is probably the hardest charart I've yet to have made lol! His mask took forever x.x

Any constructive critism? I know the top of his mask looks paler, that on purpose and please do not make me change it as there is no way I can ._. <font color="#A700D1" face="Chiller" style="background:#8FFF9C" size="4">VioletEclipse Contact me!.::. 00:06, June 12, 2013 (UTC)

This is nice. c: Where's the light source for this? And maybe blur the earpink furthest from us? 00:12, June 12, 2013 (UTC)

I can't really, unfortunately, blur that earpink but I'll try to shade it to the best of my abilities. Phantomheart usually looms in the shadows so I didn't add any highlights for that reason :3

00:21, June 12, 2013 (UTC)

When I mean light source, I mean where does the shading face? 00:24, June 12, 2013 (UTC)

None in particular. Again, I'm not very good at chararts but I did what I learned a while back when I was a user at WW. To that, I really don't remember, but what I do is that shading goes around the neck, back, and around the outline. Ack, now I sound confusing xD

<font color="#A700D1" face="Chiller" style="background:#8FFF9C" size="4">VioletEclipse Contact me!.::. 15:07, June 12, 2013 (UTC)

The shading needs to face somewhere... x3 How about our left, like Iciclesky? 19:40, June 12, 2013 (UTC)

I can't change that. <font color="#A700D1" face="Chiller" style="background:#8FFF9C" size="4">VioletEclipse Contact me!.::. 19:51, June 12, 2013 (UTC)

Do you have layers? 20:05, June 12, 2013 (UTC)

No, this is all done without? -Vi

Oh... there needs to be layers d: 21:03, June 12, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? 02:57, December 9, 2013 (UTC)

Declined, its been like a year 21:11, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

Charm (Q) ~ Withdrawn;


This was probably one of the most difficult chararts I've ever tried to do. Comments (anyone at all)? Ani dala  and  Leia  x Han  Shipper!  c:  00:54, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading and add a light source :>

Also, the spots should be a bit smudged to the fur direction- it usually doesn't blur like that. 19:44, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

Withdrawing due to having to redo this because I lost the editable version. R e s i d e n t i a l S h i p p i n g T r a s h D a r t h M a u l x O b i - W a n ,O b i - W a n x E l s a ,R a r i t y x F l u t t e r s h y ,S o c k x J o n a t h a n ,D o v e w i n g x B r i a r l i g h t 00:51, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Risingstar (L) ~ Withdrawn;


This one and the next go hand-in-hand. Comments? Ani dala  and  Leia  x Han  Shipper!  c:  01:33, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

It's a little overblurred? Add shading to the facial area. 23:15, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

Withdrawing due to having to redo this because I lost the editable version. R e s i d e n t i a l S h i p p i n g T r a s h D a r t h M a u l x O b i - W a n ,O b i - W a n x E l s a ,R a r i t y x F l u t t e r s h y ,S o c k x J o n a t h a n ,D o v e w i n g x B r i a r l i g h t 00:51, November 18, 2014 (UTC)

Risingstar (L alt.) ~ Withdrawn;


Hooray for my awful attempt at a white azalea. Comments? Ani dala  and  Leia  x Han  Shipper!  c:  01:33, August 21, 2014 (UTC)

See above 23:15, November 15, 2014 (UTC)

Withdrawing due to having to redo this because I lost the editable version. R e s i d e n t i a l S h i p p i n g T r a s h D a r t h M a u l x O b i - W a n ,O b i - W a n x E l s a ,R a r i t y x F l u t t e r s h y ,S o c k x J o n a t h a n ,D o v e w i n g x B r i a r l i g h t 00:51, November 18, 2014 (UTC)