Talk:Project Character Art

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Whitestep (W) - For Approval
The first cat was made with the new warrior blanks. It's... WHITESTEP! Constructments? Dappledsnow The new  generation. 20:36, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. other than that, it looks great! Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty!

Finchsong - For Approval
Hmm... Criticism? Comments? Mist fire  15:43, October 9, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the mark on the hind leg, the gray marks need blurred as well as the tail. Love leaf 19:33, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well? Frostleaf Thawed before she could blossom 01:51, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Well, make the stripes more of a real tabby pattern, like Bumblestar's (see below). Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Finchsong has darker streaks, not tabby stripes. Mistfire Owl City! 17:24, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

This has to be either archived or approved, this has been up for a long time. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Mistfire/sig}} 05:50, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Just darken the shading a bit more and she'll be ready. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  14:29, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Swiftspot (W) - For Approval


Love leaf  17:03, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the black patches slightly darker. Other than that, its really good! Harley Quinn 11:58, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I kinda disagree. I think the colors are fine. Love leaf  13:49, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

It just needs to be a teeny-tiny bit darker. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Love leaf 20:09, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the body looks kinda blotchy.

That's all that I really see wrong with it; just smooth the shading out a bit Sky Storm's brewing... 23:42, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Silversoul (W) ~ Declined
I'll re-do it later, but here's Silversoul. Right now, in rp, she's a queen, but here's her warrior pixel. Any questions? ...Besides that there's a ton of white pixels and it is crap, I realise that. Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  18:26, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Its too small. Harley Quinn 11:57, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

Should we decline this? It's been up here for a while and nothing's been done. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:32, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Prey Hunter Blanks ~ Declined
For the tribes. Love leaf 22:25, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Make them bigger. But these are ... AMAZING!!! <font color="Orange" style="background:Black">Halloween <font color="Silver" style="background:Black">Sleepy Hollow <font color="White" style="background:Black">Woman in White 22:51, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Don't take this the wrong way, but the faces are too big. The eyes are droopy, and the paws, legs, and such are short, thin, and they just don't look right.<font color="#000000" style="background:#FF0000">Harley <font color="#FF0000" style="#0d0d0d">Quinn 20:45, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

They were orginally kit blanks, that's why they look as they do, but then we got new ones. I'll tell you what I'll make them bigger, and I'll fix the legs and eyes. But that's all that I'll do hold on. <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 19:21, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

My Computer won't let me upload them, I have to use a gallery! Sorry! <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 19:21, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I got them! <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 19:29, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Err... the legs and tail need to be longer, still. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:06, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

The legs and tail need to be longer, and the head nees to be a little smaller. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Rogue Blanks - Declined


I redid the rogue blanks because the anatomy was seriously off. And they creeped me out. Comments? Elorisa ♥ Nic  23:54, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

I love :D  Sand  BOO...Trick or treat 00:04, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

They are nice, but my rogue blanks are really good. They are not creepy! Yours are great, too, but I spent A LONG time doing these blanks:

<font color="#000000" style="background:#FF0000">Harley <font color="#FF0000" style="#0d0d0d">Quinn 19:05, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, I probably spent a longer time on these, ust trying to get the anatomy at least a little correct. Anyway, on the only ones, the anatomy was seriously off, making them look a litte...weird. Elorisa ♥ Nic  20:06, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry 4pinkbear. But I agree that these look awesome, not that yours dosen't, of course (see my blanks above XD) but maybe a change isn't that bad. <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 21:14, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

See if you can make the blanks more catlike. They kind of look like wolves. Mist fire  03:11, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Er... since you are not fixing these, its declined

No it's not, my art comp has been down. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  22:48, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Hikari (Ki) ~ For Approval
I know she's no good, I'll redo it later. Anyway, here's Hikarikit. ^_^

Comments? Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  18:11, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is great :). Blur the shading some more. Creamsplash  The stars will never forget you.  19:49, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her legs and tail and add a little to her wings. <font color="Violet" style="background:Aquamarine">Dawnkit of DuskClan <font color="Thistle" >Poor little kit. 11:09, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Comments? Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  18:16, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Earpink seems a little too blurred. <font color="#797979" style="background:#86e4e5">Frostleaf <font color="#63c47c" >Thawed before she could blossom 18:19, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Earpink is unatural. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

How so? Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  14:07, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is too purple. It needs to be a salmony pink. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 14:12, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading on the the wings and a teeny-tiny bit on her forehead, where the fur sticks up.

Creamsplash (A) - Approved
Well, I finally got off my lazy bum and made her :). Comments? Creamsplash  The stars will never forget you.  19:49, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Where the brown meets the tan needs to be blurred more. <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 21:13, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

If you could smudge the belly like you did the shoulders and tail, that would be great. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Declined, been around WAY too long! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I just needed some time to work on it. This is not declined >:(. I feel offended.... Ellie says;  Merry Christmas!  22:48, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Happy now? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  01:25, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur or smudge a bit under his left (our right) eye. Sky Storm's brewing... 23:46, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Halloween (Rogue) - Withdrawn
I worked REALLY hard on him - I think he looks awesome!



What do you think? Berrypetal's about to have a litter that looks just like him - reserve your own kitten like this guy right away on my talkpage by 5:00 P.M TODAY! :D <font color="#CLC766FF" style="background:#f5ff66">Violetshadow: &quot;Death of a gentle rose...&quot;  18:28, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

He does look awesome! I am so reserving a kit! Although the back leg has a lot of messy black smears and the front legs could use cleaning up. Loveleaf Happy Halloween!  18:48, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs a massive amount of blurring on the black parts. Also the earpink color looks odd. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  20:40, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

let's Archive this. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I withdrawn it. I know he is kinda....bad. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Lightheart (W) ~ For Approval
<font color="Aquamarine" face="Monotype Corsiva" style="background:black">Love <font color="lime" face="Monotype Corsiva" style="background:black">leaf 20:15, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... I can't see any shading or highlights at all. And the stubby tail and scars look sloppy. Mistfire Owl City! 18:01, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

As Mistfire said, its REALLY sloppy work. No offense, but its really bad. The blurred fur is... not supposed to look like that. There is no shading. The right ear looks horrible. There is a lot of blurred lineart, and the tail...... well.... its not very good. Declining. Archiving. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 19:34, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is  NOT  declined just because it may be below standards. You just have to tell Loveleaf over here how to fix it.

Darken the shading, and if you need any help, you can ask me :-).

Yeah guys that is really rude the message above there. Anyways Loveleaf maybe re-do the white patches and smudge them and make sure there is no blurred lineart on the char art  Sand  Merry Christmas 12:35, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Birdpaw, Loveleaf, and Elorisa: I am NOT trying to be rude. I just stated my entirely honest opinion. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm. I say I did my job well. Lightheart is supossed to be slopp, sruffy, ugly and have weird spots. But I didn't shade it, now that I look at it. The tail IS supossed to look terrible. Thats the point. He's neglected and scared. I'm just going to fix shading, but that's it. Loveleaf. (This is really me)

If he's supposed to look scruffy, then you could be... neater about it. the lineart is more messed up than it should be. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the head and belly. Sky Storm's brewing... 20:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The spots are supossed to look like that and he is supossed to look un-neat. Forget it. I'm withdrawling it, because nothing going to happen to it. Not mad, just saying the truth: It is not going to get accepted. <font face="Comic Sans MS"><font style="background:Red; border:2px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Navy; -webkit-border-radius: 10px;"> Loveleaf   ♦  20:50, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I took it over. I darkened the shading.

Loveleaf: Does it still look scruffy enough? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  21:26, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes need fixing. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The spots were supossed to be like that, it dosen't look like him now, but other than that, and the ear, I guess it's fine, although the spots need to be changed back. Sorry. Loveleaf (Forgot to sign in)

Sparkleap (W) - For Approval
Okay, here's Sparkleap. I didn't know what color her eyes are, so I made them green. Mistfire Owl City! 22:13, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

She looks good! Her eyes are amber - I just forgot to add that! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 12:38, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry, I just can't get the new version to come up. Maybe I can nominate it for tweak week. Mistfire Owl City! 15:32, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind! Mistfire Owl City! 16:19, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay... now make the shading darker and blur the highlights. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 18:22, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Mistfire Owl City! 18:59, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  20:45, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Bumblestar (L) ~ Withdrawn
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

There's a big white spot on the chest. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Mistfire, that's the highlights. Dovesong, the highlights on the chest need to be darkened. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

He's supposed to have a white dash on his chest. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 22:20, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

You should maybe make it more of a dash, as it now kinda looks like a mystical orb of light (XD) and the eyes have nothing to them, really. Maybe you should smudge some lighter colors in there? <font face="Comic Sans MS"><font style="background:Red; border:2px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Navy; -webkit-border-radius: 10px;"> Loveleaf   ♦  22:42, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sweetsplash (L) ~ Approved
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC) Blur stripes.<font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

And the highlights. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  18:44, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Don't withdraw this one! It's really good! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 21:30, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Waterpaw (MCA) ~ Withdrawn
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes - they are uneven. You shouldn't have SO many chararts out. Please withdraw some. I will make the limit 3 at a time from now on.

I'll get to this in a bit. I know I still seem to have tons of art up, but most of it needs to be archived. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 22:25, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Miley (Lo) ~ Approved
When we approve the loner blanks, I have this charart of my loner, who can be found in the Loners of the Forest talk page. <font color="Blue">You do understand <font color="Blue">I'm going to have to sick my  <font color="Blue">Gatomon on you, right?  13:01, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and I see whire pixels in some places. 4pinkbear 23:46, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

I'm reuplouding this, I've fixed the white pixels and blurred most of the shading. Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  15:25, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Jumpfire (W) - Approved
Hmmmm... not so great. Comments? -- Sky Storm's brewing... 03:04, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Nonsense, he's great! Just make the hightlights more prominent and then it'll be ready for CBA! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 19:36, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Made the highlihgts a little more obvious. Sky Storm's brewing... 20:13, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the ginger and black together. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 18:25, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Why? I didn't make him to be smudged, I made him to look like he does. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 18:46, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Halloweenpaw (A) - Approved
What do you think? Based on the image above, though I'm not sure they're the same cat. Comments? Sky Storm's brewing... 20:08, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

No, they aren't related. He looks great! Blur the smudge marks a tad! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 19:36, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Blurred the smudges. Sky Storm's brewing... 20:12, December 17, 2010 (UTC﻿)

MC and MCA
Do you think we have enough people to vote for MC and MCA? If so, I vote for Dove for MC! Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 18:48, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Well I'd like to be MCA. ℳerry spirit 16:50, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

I vote Mistfire. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 16:53, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I'd like to be one... Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 19:54, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

If you do, we will make you MCA.

Really? That would be awesome. I don't care which one I get. :) Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 23:29, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

I would like to be MC. Mistfire said she wanted to be MCA, and I put a vote for Skydragon as MCA.

Tally:

MC: 

Dove: 1 vote

Mistfire: 1 vote

MCA: 

Skydragon: 1 vote

Anyone else want to vote/add into this? So far, there is a tie for MC, and only Skydragon for MCA. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 13:22, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

I voted Mistfire for MC, not MCA. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 13:58, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

She said she wanted to be MCA, so that's where I put her. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 14:03, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Who else needs to vote? Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 23:39, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Pollenfox (Q) - For Approval
I'm not darkening the shading, or she'll look like a cat popsicle, 'cause of the shading style I used. Comments? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  15:53, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Why are you using the old blanks? My queen blanks are approved! Change it to the new queen blanks or it is declined! >:( <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 16:43, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

The new queen blanks have lots of extra gray pixels in them, they're too big, and they are jpegs. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  17:30, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

There's nothing on 4pinkbear's blanks that we can't fix. I'm currently working on fixing them. When I get them up, transfer this onto the new blank. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 15:33, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Berrypetal - For Approval
Here's Berrypetal. She works out great!

Well, I might not keep her out for long. I don't want to spend forever on this.

Elorisa: The pic isn't that big. In fact, the leader blanks are bigger.

<font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 01:07, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot, darken it, blur the earpink, and add depth to the eyes. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  01:07, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get to it soon, just not tonight. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 01:09, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Dawningwater (W) ~ For Approval
I like this one! :) I can't add in her second wing, though. Comments? <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 16:45, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches a bit more and add in more shading. Other than that, it's great. ^_^ Shinku  5th of the Rozen Maidens  23:28, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Morningthroat (W) ~ Approved
I like this one, too! :) Comments? <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 16:45, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

She's gorgeous! Just blur the patches and the shading a little bit, and maybe lighten the ear-pink so that it doesn't come quite as close to her pelt color. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 23:44, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tried to blur patches and shading, and I lightened the earpink some. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 15:23, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Cluefire (MCA) - For Approval
So here's Cluefire, from Pearlclan! Will fix the shading when I can get access to pixlr. (my computer is being stupid) anyway, what do you think? Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 05:01, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Fixed the shading and added chemical stains. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 19:12, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Either add nose pink or darken the nose pink. Darken the silver and black patches. Brighten the highlights and darken the shading somewhat. Make her hind paws ginger. For the cream patches, try #d8b872 for a color. Otherwise, she's very nice! <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 15:28, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darkjewel (W) -for approval
Here's Darkjewel! (again, will fix shading when I can get on pixlr) Comments? Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 05:23, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Add more depth to the eyes. User:Mistfire/sig 05:45, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Tried to add more depth and fixed the shading. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 19:15, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the silver a little more gray and the blue and purple more black. Otherwise, she's beautiful! <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 15:30, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Nightflare (W) -for approval
Here's Nightflare. The flecks are actually different colors, they're just so small that the color difference is... hard to see. Whatcha think? Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 22:52, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Just darken the shading and darken the ear and nose pink. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  17:58, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened shading and pink. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 18:11, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

actuallly, I would suggest making the ear pink a paler, lighter color. It looks too... neon.<font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 16:31, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Wolfwillow (W) ~ For Approval
Here's Wolfwillow. I really like how she turned out. Comments? <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 18:04, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Just blur the shading some more. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  18:27, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkmask (W) - Up For Approval
Here's Hawkmask! Comments? ℳĨ₰₮ ₣ĨȒ€ Happy New Year!  18:08, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! Just darken the shading and add highlights to the wings. Zexion; The Cloaked Schemer  18:49, January 1, 2011 (UTC)