Talk:EchoingClan

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May I please add in:

Darkdawn: Black and white tom with gold eyes.

Longshadow: Tortoiseshell she-cat with gray eyes.

Echoingsong: White tom with a faint blue tint to pelt, black paws and dark gray eyes.

Thornflower: Dark brown tabby she-cat with brown eyes. ♥Phoenixfeather: Izaya is a hot psycho!♥  19:17, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

(facepalm) Just noticed what it says on the page. I fail badly. ♥Phoenixfeather: Izaya is a hot psycho!♥  19:20, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Join?
May I join as these cats:

Mallowpaw(frost)- Silvery-gray marbled tabby she-cat with white flecks on her pelt and green eyes. Cloudpaw's sister. (Apprentice; Mentor: Bluethorn)

Brindlepaw(rose)- Mottled dark brown tabby, cream tabby, black and pale orange tabby she-cat with cream-pink eyes. (Apprentice; Mentor: Lilydapple)

Cloudpaw(mist)- White she-cat with pale gray marbled tabby splotches and sky blue eyes. (Apprentice; Mentor: Can it be Echoingsong?)

Bluethorn- Mottled blue-gray tom with black stripes and icy blue eyes with ambery-brown flecks inside of them. (Warrior; Apprentice: Mallowpaw)

Lilydapple- Mottled cream marbled tabby she-cat with mottled pale gray marbled tabby and white splotches and pale lavender eyes. (Warrior; Apprentice: Brindlepaw)

Ripplestorm- Mottled blue-gray tom with black tabby and dark, smoky gray tabby splotches and ambery-blue eyes with ice blue flecks near his pupils. (Warrior; Mate: Cloverdapple)

Cloverdapple- Pale tortoiseshell she-cat with pale brown, green-white and golden-brown splotches and green eyes. (Queen; Mate: Ripplestorm; Expecting Ripplestorm's kits.)

~Sunsetpaw♥ ~The Sunset Breeze will rise above...♥ ~  20:19, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Please re-read the front page and you'll notice what you've done wrong. Mew Mew Sakura!  20:39, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Echoingsong will mentor Mallowpaw once you correct your error. ♥Phoenixfeather: Izaya is a hot psycho!♥  21:53, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

These are short for me. Also Mallowpaw will not be mentored by Echoingsong. She will be mentored by Bluethorn. Can Cloudpaw be mentored by Echoingsong? ~Sunsetpaw♥ ~The Sunset Breeze will rise above...♥ ~  19:20, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

You have to make them shorter so they're not several sentences long. ♥Phoenixfeather: Izaya is a hot psycho!♥  19:22, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Detailed stuff like this can go on CHARACTER PAGES. I need short descriptions, sorry.

Like, for example, I'll do Ripplestorm :

Ripplestorm - mottled blue-gray tom with black and dark grey tabby splotches and amber-blue eyes.

See? I totally simplified it. Mew Mew Sakura!  20:43, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Is that better? I am only keeping one personality word in the front, is that okay? ~Sunsetpaw♥ ~The Sunset Breeze will rise above...♥ ~  23:19, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Add them in. ♥Phoenixfeather: Izaya is a hot psycho!♥  23:35, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

I am the MAIN owner, Phoenix. I did not accept these, they were NOT short enough. I gave an example, she didn't follow. Mew Mew Sakura!  00:41, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Is this short enough!? ~Sunsetpaw♥ ~The Sunset Breeze will rise above...♥ ~  00:43, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Look, I shortened it for you. If you want a detailed description, put it on a character page. Now you may add them in. Mew Mew Sakura!  00:45, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

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Frozendawn - Very pale silver tabby and white she-cat with darker streaks of fur, and pale, icy-blue eyes.

Apprentice; Fangpaw

Moonclaw - Fluffy black and white tom with pale gray paws, and pale blue-amber eyes.

Apprentice; Spiritpaw

Reedfang - Light brown tabby tom with white paws, and green-yellow-amber eyes.

Spiritpaw - Pure silver she-cat with fluffy fur, and silver eyes.

Fangpaw - Fluffy silver, black, and white tom with soft fur, and green eyes.

Rivergaze - Black she-cat with dark brown paws, a gray stripe down her spine, and river-blue eyes. Expecting Moonclaw's kits.

 Saïx;  The Luna Diviner  13:59, July 4, 2011 (UTC)