Talk:Character Art/Archive 5

Whitestep (W) - Approved
The first cat was made with the new warrior blanks. It's... WHITESTEP! Constructments? Dappledsnow The new  generation. 20:36, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. other than that, it looks great! Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty!

Creamsplash (A) - Approved
Well, I finally got off my lazy bum and made her :). Comments? Creamsplash  The stars will never forget you.  19:49, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Where the brown meets the tan needs to be blurred more. Love leaf 21:13, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

If you could smudge the belly like you did the shoulders and tail, that would be great. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Declined, been around WAY too long! Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I just needed some time to work on it. This is not declined >:(. I feel offended.... Ellie says;  Merry Christmas!  22:48, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Happy now? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  01:25, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur or smudge a bit under his left (our right) eye. Sky Storm's brewing... 23:46, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sweetsplash (L) ~ Approved
Comments? Merry Christmas! o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC) Blur stripes.Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

And the highlights. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  18:44, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Don't withdraw this one! It's really good! Christmasheart 21:30, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Waterpaw (MCA) ~ Withdrawn
Comments? Merry Christmas! o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes - they are uneven. You shouldn't have SO many chararts out. Please withdraw some. I will make the limit 3 at a time from now on.

I'll get to this in a bit. I know I still seem to have tons of art up, but most of it needs to be archived. Merry Christmas! o3o 22:25, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Miley (Lo) ~ Approved
When we approve the loner blanks, I have this charart of my loner, who can be found in the Loners of the Forest talk page. You do understand I'm going to have to sick my  <font color="Blue">Gatomon on you, right?  13:01, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and I see whire pixels in some places. 4pinkbear 23:46, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

I'm reuplouding this, I've fixed the white pixels and blurred most of the shading. Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  15:25, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Jumpfire (W) - Approved
Hmmmm... not so great. Comments? -- Sky Storm's brewing... 03:04, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Nonsense, he's great! Just make the hightlights more prominent and then it'll be ready for CBA! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 19:36, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Made the highlihgts a little more obvious. Sky Storm's brewing... 20:13, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the ginger and black together. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 18:25, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Why? I didn't make him to be smudged, I made him to look like he does. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 18:46, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Halloweenpaw (A) - Approved
What do you think? Based on the image above, though I'm not sure they're the same cat. Comments? Sky Storm's brewing... 20:08, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

No, they aren't related. He looks great! Blur the smudge marks a tad! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 19:36, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Blurred the smudges. Sky Storm's brewing... 20:12, December 17, 2010 (UTC﻿)

Morningthroat (W) ~ Approved
I like this one, too! :) Comments? <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 16:45, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

She's gorgeous! Just blur the patches and the shading a little bit, and maybe lighten the ear-pink so that it doesn't come quite as close to her pelt color. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 23:44, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tried to blur patches and shading, and I lightened the earpink some. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 15:23, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! :) Sky Song of the storm... 20:20, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darkjewel (W) - Approved
Here's Darkjewel! (again, will fix shading when I can get on pixlr) Comments? Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 05:23, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Add more depth to the eyes. 05:45, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Tried to add more depth and fixed the shading. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 19:15, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the silver a little more gray and the blue and purple more black. Otherwise, she's beautiful! <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 15:30, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened the colors. (actually had to re-do her; my computer is messing up. 20:41, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Blur belly shading.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  14:56, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nightflare (W) - Approved
Here's Nightflare. The flecks are actually different colors, they're just so small that the color difference is... hard to see. Whatcha think? Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 22:52, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Just darken the shading and darken the ear and nose pink. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  17:58, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Darkened shading and pink. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 18:11, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

actuallly, I would suggest making the ear pink a paler, lighter color. It looks too... neon.<font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 16:31, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Made the pink lighter, but not quite as light as before. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 01:43, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the hi-lites.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  14:57, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Wolfwillow (W) ~ Approved
Here's Wolfwillow. I really like how she turned out. Comments? <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 18:04, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

This is great! Just blur the shading some more. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  18:27, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Very nice. Blur the shading, and I'd say she's done. Sky Song of the storm... 20:42, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the scar and then blur it. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:59, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

I'll blur the shading, but I think that the scar should be thin and smudged like it is. Mew Mew  Zakuro  15:10, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkmask (W) - Approved
Here's Hawkmask! Comments? ℳĨ₰₮ ₣ĨȒ€ Happy New Year!  18:08, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! Just darken the shading and add highlights to the wings. Zexion; The Cloaked Schemer  18:49, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reupoaded. Darkened shading and added highlights to the wings. ℳĨ₰₮ ₣ĨȒ€ Happy New Year!  16:41, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! love the mask effect. I think I'd darken the shading and desaturate the ear pink, but that's just me. Sky Song of the storm... 20:15, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded.  Mist eh' Wants a cupcakeh! 01:39, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sharkstrike (W) - Approved
Ugh, Terrible. I sorta like it, but it is still terrible... especially the fins and tail. Comments? <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 15:25, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, but it would be impossible for a cat to hold it's self and back end on one leg. I would suggest altering the tail and front paw that's in the air onto the ground, so it looks like it's dragging it. If you need help, I'll help you. Zexion; The Cloaked Schemer  15:27, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

He's Swimming. And plus, It would take me FOREVER to fix the cat's tail to droop down because I would have to redo most of the cat! :( <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 15:34, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

How's that? Zexion; The Cloaked Schemer  15:37, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

I think that's great! Thanks, Elorisa! Any more comments? <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 15:47, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

You're welcome. Zexion; The Cloaked Schemer  16:19, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Where the grat meets the white needs to be blurred more. ℳĨ₰₮ ₣ĨȒ€ Happy New Year!  16:27, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

'''Blurred to the max. '''Didn't do much effect... <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 16:46, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. Maybe widen the fins and the leg closest to us just a bit though, right now they look a bit...squished. (no offence meant) Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 01:15, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I highly disagree. They look fine.

Clean up the discolored pixels.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  14:59, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Limepaw (app) - Approved
What'cha think? I kinda like how he came out, specially the scale patches. So, comments? Sky Song of the storm... 20:26, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

He needs shading/highlights on the white, and brighten the highlight on the wing. ℳĨ₰₮ ₣ĨȒ€ Happy New Year!  15:06, January 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading and the highlights on the white visible better. He is also kinda... pixel-like, on the white parts and around the body. Other than that, I'm impressed! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 21:42, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Fixed the pixelation and added shading. Sky Song of the storm... 20:37, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm... The earpink is too dark. Lighten it. Blur the shading and the scale patches. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 20:06, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Lightened the earpink, but I don't want to blur the scales... they shouldn't be... blendable. They're solid. Sky Song of the storm... 20:26, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

There's a big gray patch all around the outside of him.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  15:03, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I know... Not sure how to fix it, but I'm working on it. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 18:19, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Hopefully grey is fixed now. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:04, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, it is. Redden the earpink.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  02:50, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Fox (To-Be) ~ Approved
Check it out! It's the To-be of the Tribe of the Shining﻿ Sun, Fox with Bushiest Tail, or just Fox. Any comments? Sexy Panty Gothic Stocking  22:09, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

No-one's commented so would this be considered approved? Sexy Panty Gothic Stocking  20:30, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Anyone there? Sexy Panty Gothic Stocking  22:28, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, either brighten or add more highlights, make the earpink more reddish, and smudge it into the ear. <font color="Magenta" >☯Maxine: <font color="Black" >Your Cutest Nightmare☮ 22:48, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded blurred shading, added and brightened highlights and made the earpink more hot pinkish. Sexy Panty Gothic Stocking  23:25, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

So? How does she look? I don't belive in coincidence or luck  I believe in Destiny  19:10, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less neon, add a highlight to the haunch, it looks bare. Otherwise, looks great! Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  19:30, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:26, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added highlights to the haunch, blurred shading and I lightened the earpink. I don't belive in coincidence or luck  I believe in Destiny  16:51, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  17:00, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Säikähdyspaw (A) - Approved
Comments? Demyx; The Melodious Nocturne  14:42, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Love. It. Just give him some earpink. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:26, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Pondstar (L) Approved
What'cha guys think? Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:59, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more natural...blur the eyes a tad (the highlights are unatural without blurring) <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 12:47, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:04, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

When I meant to make the earpink natural, I meant make it a paler pink. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 15:11, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ohhhh...  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  15:10, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

I like the other color better, personally. This color is too pale + bright for a gray cat. Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  15:18, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tila bit mre blue. It's too gray to be blue-gray. The color #4b4b76 woud be a good idea. Mew Mew  Zakuro  18:38, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thrushwing (W) - Appproved
My best by far.



Yes, the shading's blurred to the max. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 23:04, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

I really love the eyes, they're perfect! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:37, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks amazing! I agree with Leafbreeze, the eyes are really cool. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 18:34, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks very good. ♥Mew Mew Phoenix feather!♥  22:48, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well, nobody's commented since... 2 days ago, so I will go ahead and approved it. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 11:30, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

I am gonna just put it as approved. This is the best charart I personally think I ever have done! <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 14:11, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darkfire (Alt) - Approved


This is Darkfire in his worst form. I in fact went ahead and blurred everything. I added a glow around him because he, well, isn't entirely cat, is he!? The glow is supposed to look solid and is supposed to look....sloppy. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 21:13, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, it looks pretty good, 4pinkbear. The glow isn't half-bad. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  21:14, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I know this is weird, yet it's still a contructive crit. The mouth looks as though smiling, yet if this is his worst form, shouldn't the mouth be in a manaic frown or something? It's kinda looks happy.... <font color="blue" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">♥Love <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf♥ 21:44, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the stains on his pelt aren't just from the blood from killing helpless cats, It's also from the stress of trying to absorb every cat. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 21:26, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry placed my post before yours <font color="blue" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">♥Love <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf♥ 21:45, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

He's smiling because he's about to kill everyone! :D <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 10:51, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

OK, its been 2 days. Darkfire is a very bad  kitty-thingy-mer-bobber! :D  20:19, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

He looks good. Might wanna smooth the glow out, if possible, but if not, that's okay too. I like him. Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 20:38, February 16, 2011 (UTC)