Talk:Project Character Art

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Longtail (MCA) - For Approval
Here's Burrfang's brother! Comments? User:Elorisa/Sig 12:41, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think he looks great, but I have something to say about the hind legs. Maybe you could add some highlights? Love leaf  18:07, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I see the highlights just fine, but make the earpink bigger on the non-torn ear. Otherwise, he's great. Willowsong  and Dappledsnow 17:50, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Creamsplash  The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pale pinker. Other than that, he's great! Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

I don't want to make it any more paler, because it's the same color of Longtail's image on Warriors Wiki -.-. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:16, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

He looks awesome. I see nothing wrong. Sky Song of the storm... 20:40, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Whitestep (W) - Approved
The first cat was made with the new warrior blanks. It's... WHITESTEP! Constructments? Dappledsnow The new  generation. 20:36, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. other than that, it looks great! Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty!

Finchsong - For Approval
Hmm... Criticism? Comments? Mist fire  15:43, October 9, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the mark on the hind leg, the gray marks need blurred as well as the tail. Love leaf 19:33, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well? Frostleaf Thawed before she could blossom 01:51, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Well, make the stripes more of a real tabby pattern, like Bumblestar's (see below). Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Finchsong has darker streaks, not tabby stripes. Mistfire Owl City! 17:24, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Swiftspot (W)-For Approval


Love leaf  17:03, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the black patches slightly darker. Other than that, its really good! Harley Quinn 11:58, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I kinda disagree. I think the colors are fine. Love leaf  13:49, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

It just needs to be a teeny-tiny bit darker. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Love leaf 20:09, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the body looks kinda blotchy.

That's all that I really see wrong with it; just smooth the shading out a bit Sky Storm's brewing... 23:42, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Silversoul (W) ~ For Approval
I'll re-do it later, but here's Silversoul. Right now, in rp, she's a queen, but here's her warrior pixel. Any questions? ...Besides that there's a ton of white pixels and it is crap, I realise that. Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  18:26, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Its too small. <font color="#000000" style="background:#FF0000">Harley <font color="#FF0000" style="#0d0d0d">Quinn 11:57, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

Should we decline this? It's been up here for a while and nothing's been done. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:32, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Prey Hunter Blanks ~ For Approval
For the tribes. <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 22:25, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Make them bigger. But these are ... AMAZING!!! <font color="Orange" style="background:Black">Halloween <font color="Silver" style="background:Black">Sleepy Hollow <font color="White" style="background:Black">Woman in White 22:51, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Don't take this the wrong way, but the faces are too big. The eyes are droopy, and the paws, legs, and such are short, thin, and they just don't look right.<font color="#000000" style="background:#FF0000">Harley <font color="#FF0000" style="#0d0d0d">Quinn 20:45, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

They were orginally kit blanks, that's why they look as they do, but then we got new ones. I'll tell you what I'll make them bigger, and I'll fix the legs and eyes. But that's all that I'll do hold on. <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 19:21, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

My Computer won't let me upload them, I have to use a gallery! Sorry! <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 19:21, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I got them! <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 19:29, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Err... the legs and tail need to be longer, still. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:06, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

The legs and tail need to be longer, and the head nees to be a little smaller. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Rogue Blanks - Declined


I redid the rogue blanks because the anatomy was seriously off. And they creeped me out. Comments? Elorisa ♥ Nic  23:54, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

I love :D  Sand  BOO...Trick or treat 00:04, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

They are nice, but my rogue blanks are really good. They are not creepy! Yours are great, too, but I spent A LONG time doing these blanks:

<font color="#000000" style="background:#FF0000">Harley <font color="#FF0000" style="#0d0d0d">Quinn 19:05, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, I probably spent a longer time on these, ust trying to get the anatomy at least a little correct. Anyway, on the only ones, the anatomy was seriously off, making them look a litte...weird. Elorisa ♥ Nic  20:06, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry 4pinkbear. But I agree that these look awesome, not that yours dosen't, of course (see my blanks above XD) but maybe a change isn't that bad. <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 21:14, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

See if you can make the blanks more catlike. They kind of look like wolves. Mist fire  03:11, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Er... since you are not fixing these, its declined

No it's not, my art comp has been down. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  22:48, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Hikari (Ki) ~ For Approval
I know she's no good, I'll redo it later. Anyway, here's Hikarikit. ^_^

Comments? Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  18:11, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is great :). Blur the shading some more. Creamsplash  The stars will never forget you.  19:49, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her legs and tail and add a little to her wings. <font color="Violet" style="background:Aquamarine">Dawnkit of DuskClan <font color="Thistle" >Poor little kit. 11:09, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Comments? Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  18:16, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Earpink seems a little too blurred. <font color="#797979" style="background:#86e4e5">Frostleaf <font color="#63c47c" >Thawed before she could blossom 18:19, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Earpink is unatural. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

How so? Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  14:07, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is too purple. It needs to be a salmony pink. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 14:12, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Creamsplash (A) - For Approval
Well, I finally got off my lazy bum and made her :). Comments? Creamsplash  The stars will never forget you.  19:49, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Where the brown meets the tan needs to be blurred more. <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 21:13, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

If you could smudge the belly like you did the shoulders and tail, that would be great. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Declined, been around WAY too long! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I just needed some time to work on it. This is not declined >:(. I feel offended.... Ellie says;  Merry Christmas!  22:48, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Happy now? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  01:25, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur or smudge a bit under his left (our right) eye. Sky Storm's brewing... 23:46, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Halloween (Rogue) - Withdrawn
I worked REALLY hard on him - I think he looks awesome!



What do you think? Berrypetal's about to have a litter that looks just like him - reserve your own kitten like this guy right away on my talkpage by 5:00 P.M TODAY! :D <font color="#CLC766FF" style="background:#f5ff66">Violetshadow: &quot;Death of a gentle rose...&quot;  18:28, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

He does look awesome! I am so reserving a kit! Although the back leg has a lot of messy black smears and the front legs could use cleaning up. Loveleaf Happy Halloween!  18:48, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs a massive amount of blurring on the black parts. Also the earpink color looks odd. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  20:40, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

let's Archive this. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I withdrawn it. I know he is kinda....bad. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Jayfrost (W) - For Approval
Here's Jayfrost! Any comments? <font color="#797979" style="background:#86e4e5">Frostleaf <font color="#63c47c" >Thawed before she could blossom 02:51, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm...blur the light circles a bit more...I think it's good but that.. <font face="Comic Sans MS"><font style="background:#68bebe; border:2px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Navy; -webkit-border-radius: 10px;"> Loveleaf   ♥  22:07, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred highlights. Mistfire Owl City! 18:47, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Lovely. Smudge the gray translation and it will be ready. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 18:57, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Smudged/blurred the white/gray transition. Mistfire Owl City! 19:10, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur tabby stripes then it will be ready ;)  Sand  Merry Christmas 12:35, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred stripes. Mistfire Owl City! 18:08, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Approved, job well done! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

This has to go through CBA first, and there are some white flecks in her ear. Fill those in and she'll be ready. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 00:54, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I filled in the white parts. Mistfire Owl City! 01:36, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  18:44, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Lightheart (W) ~ For Approval
<font color="Aquamarine" face="Monotype Corsiva" style="background:black">Love <font color="lime" face="Monotype Corsiva" style="background:black">leaf 20:15, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... I can't see any shading or highlights at all. And the stubby tail and scars look sloppy. Mistfire Owl City! 18:01, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

As Mistfire said, its REALLY sloppy work. No offense, but its really bad. The blurred fur is... not supposed to look like that. There is no shading. The right ear looks horrible. There is a lot of blurred lineart, and the tail...... well.... its not very good. Declining. Archiving. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 19:34, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is  NOT  declined just because it may be below standards. You just have to tell Loveleaf over here how to fix it.

Darken the shading, and if you need any help, you can ask me :-).

Yeah guys that is really rude the message above there. Anyways Loveleaf maybe re-do the white patches and smudge them and make sure there is no blurred lineart on the char art  Sand  Merry Christmas 12:35, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Birdpaw, Loveleaf, and Elorisa: I am NOT trying to be rude. I just stated my entirely honest opinion. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm. I say I did my job well. Lightheart is supossed to be slopp, sruffy, ugly and have weird spots. But I didn't shade it, now that I look at it. The tail IS supossed to look terrible. Thats the point. He's neglected and scared. I'm just going to fix shading, but that's it. Loveleaf. (This is really me)

If he's supposed to look scruffy, then you could be... neater about it. the lineart is more messed up than it should be. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the head and belly. Sky Storm's brewing... 20:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The spots are supossed to look like that and he is supossed to look un-neat. Forget it. I'm withdrawling it, because nothing going to happen to it. Not mad, just saying the truth: It is not going to get accepted. <font face="Comic Sans MS"><font style="background:Red; border:2px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Navy; -webkit-border-radius: 10px;"> Loveleaf   ♦  20:50, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I took it over. I darkened the shading.

Loveleaf: Does it still look scruffy enough? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  21:26, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes need fixing. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The spots were supossed to be like that, it dosen't look like him now, but other than that, and the ear, I guess it's fine, although the spots need to be changed back. Sorry. Loveleaf (Forgot to sign in)

Mistfang (W) ~ For Approval
Here's Mistfang. Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:35, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the shading less..I don't know, prominent? Other than that, I think it's good. <font face="Comic Sans MS"><font style="background:#68bebe; border:2px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Navy; -webkit-border-radius: 10px;"> Loveleaf   ♥  21:39, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm not sure if it's light enough. It looks like there's no shading in Pixlr. I added in some battle scars and shredded one of her ears. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:57, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Do you have a smudge tool? It's really good for battle scars, it's how I made mine above... <font face="Comic Sans MS"><font style="background:#68bebe; border:2px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Navy; -webkit-border-radius: 10px;"> Loveleaf   ♥  22:02, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded changed scar style and shading style. Also added in a few more scars. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 12:43, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the scars more prominent. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I think it looks good. Approved! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I really can't see the scars though...they just need to be darkened a touch. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  22:48, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 17:56, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  18:44, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Bramblethorn (W) ~ For Approval
Yay! It's Bramblethorn, the cat who sacrificed hiomself to save young Flarepaw. Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 19:11, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the spike marks on the tail. Other than that, its AMAZING! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:02, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm not blurring them anymore than this because they might fade away if I do so. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 23:15, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  18:44, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Sparkleap (W) - For Approval
Okay, here's Sparkleap. I didn't know what color her eyes are, so I made them green. Mistfire Owl City! 22:13, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

She looks good! Her eyes are amber - I just forgot to add that! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 12:38, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry, I just can't get the new version to come up. Maybe I can nominate it for tweak week. Mistfire Owl City! 15:32, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind! Mistfire Owl City! 16:19, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay... now make the shading darker and blur the highlights. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 18:22, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Mistfire Owl City! 18:59, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Bumblestar (L) ~ Withdrawn
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

There's a big white spot on the chest. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Mistfire, that's the highlights. Dovesong, the highlights on the chest need to be darkened. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

He's supposed to have a white dash on his chest. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 22:20, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

You should maybe make it more of a dash, as it now kinda looks like a mystical orb of light (XD) and the eyes have nothing to them, really. Maybe you should smudge some lighter colors in there? <font face="Comic Sans MS"><font style="background:Red; border:2px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Navy; -webkit-border-radius: 10px;"> Loveleaf   ♦  22:42, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sweetsplash (L) ~ Withdrawn
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC) Blur stripes.<font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

And the highlights. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  18:44, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Waterpaw (MCA) ~ Withdrawn
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes - they are uneven. You shouldn't have SO many chararts out. Please withdraw some. I will make the limit 3 at a time from now on.

I'll get to this in a bit. I know I still seem to have tons of art up, but most of it needs to be archived. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 22:25, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Miley (Lo) ~ UFA
When we approve the loner blanks, I have this charart of my loner, who can be found in the Loners of the Forest talk page. <font color="Blue">You do understand <font color="Blue">I'm going to have to sick my  <font color="Blue">Gatomon on you, right?  13:01, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and I see whire pixels in some places. 4pinkbear 23:46, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

I'm reuplouding this, I've fixed the white pixels and blurred most of the shading. Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  15:25, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Jumpfire (W) - for approval
Hmmmm... not so great. Comments? -- Sky Storm's brewing... 03:04, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Nonsense, he's great! Just make the hightlights more prominent and then it'll be ready for CBA! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 19:36, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Made the highlihgts a little more obvious. Sky Storm's brewing... 20:13, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the ginger and black together. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 18:25, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Why? I didn't make him to be smudged, I made him to look like he does. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 18:46, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Halloweenpaw (A) -for approval
What do you think? Based on the image above, though I'm not sure they're the same cat. Comments? Sky Storm's brewing... 20:08, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

No, they aren't related. He looks great! Blur the smudge marks a tad! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 19:36, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Blurred the smudges. Sky Storm's brewing... 20:12, December 17, 2010 (UTC﻿)

MC and MCA
Do you think we have enough people to vote for MC and MCA? If so, I vote for Dove for MC! Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 18:48, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Well I'd like to be MCA. ℳerry spirit 16:50, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

I vote Mistfire. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 16:53, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Lionpoppy (W)- for approval
Bleh.... Terrible, I know. But here she is. My first attempt at a winged cat. Whatcha think? Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 21:53, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

She's not terrible! My only problems: She's a long-haired cat, her eyes are a dark blue, and her wings need to be very feathery. Otherwise, she's beautiful. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 21:59, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded...Made her long-haired, darkened eyes, feathered wings... Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 21:05, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Pollenfox (Q) - For Approval
I'm not darkening the shading, or she'll look like a cat popsicle, 'cause of the shading style I used. Comments? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  15:53, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Why are you using the old blanks? My queen blanks are approved! Change it to the new queen blanks or it is declined! >:( <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 16:43, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

The new queen blanks have lots of extra gray pixels in them, they're too big, and they are jpegs. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  17:30, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

There's nothing on 4pinkbear's blanks that we can't fix. I'm currently working on fixing them. When I get them up, transfer this onto the new blank. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 15:33, December 21, 2010 (UTC)