Talk:Character Art/Archive 4

Littlewing (W) - Approved
Second Charart! It's Littlewing! Love leaf  14:28, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great! Just blur the shanding on the stomach a bit more, and widen the pupils. Cobalt paw  ღ  14:39, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I did, but my computer won't let me reupload it. Please hold tight while I try to fix it. Love leaf

Okay! '''Reuploaded! Love leaf  15:30, September 25, 2010 (UTC)'''

Hmm...Should I add more lighter colors in the earpink? Love leaf  15:29, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, it looks good. Comments before approval? Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:29, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Burrstar (L) - For Approval.


It's my beautiful Burrstar :). Comments? Elorisa  ♥ Nic  22:14, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

The black splotches are a bit overpowering. Blur them. The ear pink is also kind of small This looks awesome! Love leaf 22:22, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Elorisa ♥ Nic  22:43, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Much. I love the eyes! Love leaf 23:03, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Really GOOD! Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Uh... wouldn't this be counted as approved, since the only comment after CBA wasn't exactly constructive? Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:29, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Driptail (W) - Approved
Comments? Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  16:32, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur Highlights a little.Frostleaf Thawed before she could blossom 16:37, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  14:30, November 7, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful! I see nothing wrong. Merry Christmas! o3o 19:13, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Everyone agrees- this is amazing! good job, Elorisa! Christmasheart 23:04, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?  Sand  Merry Christmas 12:37, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:29, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blazefire (W) - Approved
Mehhhh... Constructive criticisms? Cherryfur123  Just stick with the script... 22:14, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. 4pinkbear 00:49, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Until it's in CBA, this can't be approved! Image: Blur the shading, stripes and highlights. Geor ge 01:24, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll blur the shading stripes and highlights soon Cherryfur123  Just stick with the script... 04:29, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Cherryfur123  Just stick with the script... 16:40, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur them a lot more! :D 4pinkbear 11:36, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded

I love him! Blur the neck shading and darken his eyes. His eyes look pale orange. They should be a darker shade of orange. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Thistle">♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪ ♫Dove's gentle song♪  23:39, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

I am gonna approve this because this has been UFA for too long. <font color="#ca6ff">Lavenderheart <font color="#787878">Windwillow<font color="#52ff9d">Mintwish 18:33, October 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'm remaking it in the new blank. Comments? Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Love the stripes, Elorisa! DON'T CHANGE IT BECAUSE IT IS EPIC!!!!! :D <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Then CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 18:25, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thrushfeather (W) Approved
Here's Thrushfeather!!!! Comments. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Thistle">♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪ ♫Dove's gentle song♪  21:07, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Just smudge and blur the patches on her. ☯Icefeather Night Whispers ☯ 02:56, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? <font color="Teal" style="background:Olive">Dovesong <font color="Lime" style="background:Aqua">or <font color="Olive" style="background:Silver">Songdove 12:41, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur highlights. Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty! 15:58, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make it in the new blank. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploded better? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 23:14, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:32, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Approved <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 18:25, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Runningwisp (Ki) Approved
Here's Runningwisp as a kit! Comments. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Thistle">♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪ ♫Dove's gentle song♪  21:07, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

She's good. Just blur the highlights. ☯Icefeather Night Whispers ☯ 02:56, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font color="Silver" style="background:Black">Katniss <font color="Olive" style="background:Wheat"> x <font color="Cyan" style="background:Khaki">Peeta 15:30, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Aproved!

Darken the shading just a touch, then it'll be ready :-3 Ellie says;  Merry Christmas!  13:32, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Had to rename it to reupload it. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 13:39, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 18:25, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Dovesong (W) Approved
Here's Dovesong. I redid her because she is supposed to be fluffy. Comments? <font color="Teal" style="background:Olive">Dovesong <font color="Lime" style="background:Aqua">or <font color="Olive" style="background:Silver">Songdove 12:43, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. En Garde! Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty! 20:18, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred. <font color="Teal" style="background:Olive">Dovesong <font color="Lime" style="background:Aqua">or <font color="Olive" style="background:Silver">Songdove 20:48, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

Make it in the new blank. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 23:15, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Marvelous! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:32, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Approved <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 18:25, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Skyshine (A) - Approved
Skyshine as an apprentice! Comments? Elorisa -sama  19:42, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

She looks... AMAZING! Just blur the feather markings, and the shading a touch more! :D ☯Icefeather Night Whispers ☯ 21:07, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Redone to how she looks now. Elorisa -sama  20:11, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Theamber eye looks a little wierd. Make it more yellow-goldish. ☯Icefeather Night Whispers ☯ 21:03, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  17:20, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Great job! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:32, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Approved <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 18:25, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Pollenpoppy (MC) ~ Approved
Here's Pollenpoppy. Comments? <font color="Orange" style="background:Black">Halloween <font color="Silver" style="background:Black">Sleepy Hollow <font color="White" style="background:Black">Woman in White 21:24, October 15, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the paws and the tail-tip a bit and I think it will be ready for CBA! <font color="#000000" style="background:#FF0000">Harley <font color="#FF0000" style="#0d0d0d">Quinn 21:57, October 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur highlights a teeny bit. Mist fire  03:31, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded better? <font color="Thistle" >Dove song  22:49, November 16, 2010 (UTC)

Looks Great! Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:32, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I like it. Nice job. Sky Storm's brewing... 03:08, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Approved <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 18:25, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Flowersplash (W) -Approved
Hey everybody, I'm back! I've decided that since I'm terrible at roleplaying, I'll focus on art and maybe kit adoption. So, Flowersplash.... what do you think? Sky Storm's brewing... 15:53, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

You're not terrible! This is absolutely beautiful, just fix her eyes to look like this:<font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 16:07, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Better? Sky Storm's brewing... 20:34, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, approved. You know what, Skydragon? I am promoting you to senior warrior! You have amazing art! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

IT HAS TO GO THROUGH 'CBA' FIRST D:.

This is wonderful. CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  22:48, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

You guys are so nice! :) Do I really get to be a senior warrior? -- Sky Storm's brewing... 23:26, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, just change your rank. Yes its approved. and yes, Elorisa, I am not retarded. I know what CBA means: Comments Before Approval. I think it is just fine. I will go through CBA or automatically accept them. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 20:08, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

You don't just approve them, just incase anyone else has any comments...... -.-, and I wasn't saying you were retarded either ):<. I'm not mean. Ellie says;  Merry Christmas!  20:45, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Approved <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 18:25, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Uneksiashade (W) - Approved


So, what do you think... I couldn't do the tufted ears. Could someone fix those for me? Thanks. Sky Storm's brewing... 20:32, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I'm taking the tufted ears out of her description. Lovely image. I see nothing wrong! <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:40, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

WOW, SKYDRAGON!!! APPROVED!!!!! THIS IS THE GREATEST CHARART EVER! :D :D :D <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

That was a bit inulting to any other artists out there -.-. CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  22:48, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Elorisa, I said it because I really liked it. It doesn't mean others aren't just as awesome, its just I really like this one. I am not trying to insult anyone. Yes, Approved, though. >:( <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 20:04, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Longtail (MCA) - Approved
Here's Burrfang's brother! Comments? 12:41, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think he looks great, but I have something to say about the hind legs. Maybe you could add some highlights? Love leaf  18:07, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I see the highlights just fine, but make the earpink bigger on the non-torn ear. Otherwise, he's great. <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:Navy">Willowsong <font color="Goldenrod" style="background:Silver"> and <font color="Violet" style="background:Cyan">Dappledsnow 17:50, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Creamsplash  The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pale pinker. Other than that, he's great! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

I don't want to make it any more paler, because it's the same color of Longtail's image on Warriors Wiki -.-. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:16, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

He looks awesome. I see nothing wrong. Sky Song of the storm... 20:40, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Jayfrost (W) - Approved
Here's Jayfrost! Any comments? <font color="#797979" style="background:#86e4e5">Frostleaf <font color="#63c47c" >Thawed before she could blossom 02:51, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm...blur the light circles a bit more...I think it's good but that.. <font face="Comic Sans MS"><font style="background:#68bebe; border:2px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Navy; -webkit-border-radius: 10px;"> Loveleaf   ♥  22:07, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred highlights. Mistfire Owl City! 18:47, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Lovely. Smudge the gray translation and it will be ready. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 18:57, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Smudged/blurred the white/gray transition. Mistfire Owl City! 19:10, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur tabby stripes then it will be ready ;)  Sand  Merry Christmas 12:35, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred stripes. Mistfire Owl City! 18:08, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Approved, job well done! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

This has to go through CBA first, and there are some white flecks in her ear. Fill those in and she'll be ready. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 00:54, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I filled in the white parts. Mistfire Owl City! 01:36, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  18:44, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me! Well done, very nice job. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 21:17, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Mistfang (W) ~ Approved
Here's Mistfang. Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:35, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the shading less..I don't know, prominent? Other than that, I think it's good. <font face="Comic Sans MS"><font style="background:#68bebe; border:2px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Navy; -webkit-border-radius: 10px;"> Loveleaf   ♥  21:39, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm not sure if it's light enough. It looks like there's no shading in Pixlr. I added in some battle scars and shredded one of her ears. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:57, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Do you have a smudge tool? It's really good for battle scars, it's how I made mine above... <font face="Comic Sans MS"><font style="background:#68bebe; border:2px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Navy; -webkit-border-radius: 10px;"> Loveleaf   ♥  22:02, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded changed scar style and shading style. Also added in a few more scars. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 12:43, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the scars more prominent. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I think it looks good. Approved! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I really can't see the scars though...they just need to be darkened a touch. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  22:48, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 17:56, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  18:44, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Bramblethorn (W) ~ Approved
Yay! It's Bramblethorn, the cat who sacrificed hiomself to save young Flarepaw. Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 19:11, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the spike marks on the tail. Other than that, its AMAZING! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:02, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm not blurring them anymore than this because they might fade away if I do so. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 23:15, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  18:44, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Lionpoppy (W)- Approved
Bleh.... Terrible, I know. But here she is. My first attempt at a winged cat. Whatcha think? Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 21:53, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

She's not terrible! My only problems: She's a long-haired cat, her eyes are a dark blue, and her wings need to be very feathery. Otherwise, she's beautiful. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 21:59, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded...Made her long-haired, darkened eyes, feathered wings... Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 21:05, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Fleckedbriar (W) - Approved
I realllyyyy like this :-3. Comments? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  17:50, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful! Just blur the flecks more. 98.19.158.26 20:28, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry! The above comment was me. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" > Bells☮ 20:31, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, she's absolutely gorgeous! Just blur the flecks and maybe the red part just a tiny bit. Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 21:13, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reminds me of Brighheart. Poor Fleckbriar! Well, actually, I don't see anything wrong! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 21:56, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  02:06, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me! Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 23:45, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Skyshine (W) - Approved
I like this too :-3. Comments? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  03:26, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

It looks beautiful! Lighten the amber eye a bit, blur the wing patterns, and blur the smudges on the underbelly a tad. Then we can discuss CBA! :D

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  00:18, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Cherryflower (MC) - Approved
I like this one alot :-3. Comments? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  16:18, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

She...looks.... SUPER AWESOME! CBA? <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 18:07, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Alderblossom (W) - For Approval
I like this one :-3. Comments? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  17:58, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

She's beautiful! I honestly see nothing wrong! Sky Let it snow, let it snow! 18:04, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, Skydragon. I am putting this thorugh CBA right.... now. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 16:31, December 29, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  16:29, January 1, 2011 (UTC)

Säikähdyskit (Ki) - Approved
I like this one a lot :3. He looks so cute. Comments? Demyx; The Melodious Nocturne  17:13, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

You are on a roll Elorisa! I might have to make a "top charart of the week" section here! I see nothing wrong. CBA? <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 18:03, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me. :) Sky Song of the storm... 20:26, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Demyx; The Melodious Nocturne  23:56, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

Shokkikit (Ki) - Approved
I like this one too o3o. Comments? Demyx; The Melodious Nocturne  22:55, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

You like ALL of your art, Elorisa. And you should be proud, you are a great artist. Undergoing CBA. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 00:01, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

I don't like all of it, some of it sucks. Like my black cats....-shudders-. Demyx; The Melodious Nocturne  00:05, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Demyx; The Melodious Nocturne  23:56, January 12, 2011 (UTC)