Talk:Project Character Art

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Blazefire (W) - For Approval
Mehhhh... Constructive criticisms? Cherryfur123  Just stick with the script... 22:14, July 23, 2010 (UTC)

Approved. 4pinkbear 00:49, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Until it's in CBA, this can't be approved! Image: Blur the shading, stripes and highlights. Geor ge 01:24, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll blur the shading stripes and highlights soon Cherryfur123  Just stick with the script... 04:29, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Cherryfur123  Just stick with the script... 16:40, July 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur them a lot more! :D 4pinkbear 11:36, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded

I love him! Blur the neck shading and darken his eyes. His eyes look pale orange. They should be a darker shade of orange. ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪ ♫Dove's gentle song♪  23:39, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

I am gonna approve this because this has been UFA for too long. Lavenderheart WindwillowMintwish 18:33, October 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'm remaking it in the new blank. Comments? Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Love the stripes, Elorisa! DON'T CHANGE IT BECAUSE IT IS EPIC!!!!! :D Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Then CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thrushfeather (W) Approved
Here's Thrushfeather!!!! Comments. ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪ ♫Dove's gentle song♪  21:07, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Just smudge and blur the patches on her. ☯Icefeather Night Whispers ☯ 02:56, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? Dovesong or Songdove 12:41, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur highlights. Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty! 15:58, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make it in the new blank. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploded better? Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 23:14, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:32, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Runningwisp (Ki) Approved
Here's Runningwisp as a kit! Comments. <font color="Cyan" style="background:Thistle">♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪ ♫Dove's gentle song♪  21:07, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

She's good. Just blur the highlights. ☯Icefeather Night Whispers ☯ 02:56, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font color="Silver" style="background:Black">Katniss <font color="Olive" style="background:Wheat"> x <font color="Cyan" style="background:Khaki">Peeta 15:30, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Aproved!

Darken the shading just a touch, then it'll be ready :-3 Ellie says;  Merry Christmas!  13:32, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Had to rename it to reupload it. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 13:39, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

CBA?

Dovesong (W) Approved
Here's Dovesong. I redid her because she is supposed to be fluffy. Comments? <font color="Teal" style="background:Olive">Dovesong <font color="Lime" style="background:Aqua">or <font color="Olive" style="background:Silver">Songdove 12:43, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. En Garde! Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty! 20:18, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred. <font color="Teal" style="background:Olive">Dovesong <font color="Lime" style="background:Aqua">or <font color="Olive" style="background:Silver">Songdove 20:48, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

Make it in the new blank. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 23:15, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

Marvelous! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:32, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Skyshine (A) - Approved
Skyshine as an apprentice! Comments? Elorisa -sama  19:42, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

She looks... AMAZING! Just blur the feather markings, and the shading a touch more! :D ☯Icefeather Night Whispers ☯ 21:07, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Redone to how she looks now. Elorisa -sama  20:11, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Theamber eye looks a little wierd. Make it more yellow-goldish. ☯Icefeather Night Whispers ☯ 21:03, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  17:20, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Great job! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:32, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Longtail (MCA) - For Approval
Here's Burrfang's brother! Comments? User:Elorisa/Sig 12:41, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think he looks great, but I have something to say about the hind legs. Maybe you could add some highlights? Love leaf  18:07, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I see the highlights just fine, but make the earpink bigger on the non-torn ear. Otherwise, he's great. <font color="Aquamarine" style="background:Navy">Willowsong <font color="Goldenrod" style="background:Silver"> and <font color="Violet" style="background:Cyan">Dappledsnow 17:50, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Creamsplash  The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pale pinker. Other than that, he's great! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

I don't want to make it any more paler, because it's the same color of Longtail's image on Warriors Wiki -.-. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:16, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Whitestep (W) - Approved
The first cat was made with the new warrior blanks. It's... WHITESTEP! Constructments? <font color="Aqua" style="background:Thistle">Dappledsnow <font color="Cyan" style="background:Blue">The new <font color="Silver" style="background:Cyan"> generation. 20:36, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. other than that, it looks great! Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty!

Finchsong - For Approval
Hmm... Criticism? Comments? Mist fire  15:43, October 9, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the mark on the hind leg, the gray marks need blurred as well as the tail. <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 19:33, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well? <font color="#797979" style="background:#86e4e5">Frostleaf <font color="#63c47c" >Thawed before she could blossom 01:51, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Well, make the stripes more of a real tabby pattern, like Bumblestar's (see below). <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Finchsong has darker streaks, not tabby stripes. Mistfire Owl City! 17:24, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Pollenpoppy (MC) - For Approval
Here's Pollenpoppy. Comments? <font color="Orange" style="background:Black">Halloween <font color="Silver" style="background:Black">Sleepy Hollow <font color="White" style="background:Black">Woman in White 21:24, October 15, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the paws and the tail-tip a bit and I think it will be ready for CBA! <font color="#000000" style="background:#FF0000">Harley <font color="#FF0000" style="#0d0d0d">Quinn 21:57, October 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur highlights a teeny bit. Mist fire  03:31, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded better? <font color="Thistle" >Dove song  22:49, November 16, 2010 (UTC)

Looks Great! Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:32, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Swiftspot (W)-For Approval


Love leaf  17:03, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the black patches slightly darker. Other than that, its really good! <font color="#000000" style="background:#FF0000">Harley <font color="#FF0000" style="#0d0d0d">Quinn 11:58, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I kinda disagree. I think the colors are fine. Love leaf  13:49, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

It just needs to be a teeny-tiny bit darker. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font color="Aquamarine" face="Monotype Corsiva" style="background:black">Love <font color="lime" face="Monotype Corsiva" style="background:black">leaf 20:09, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the body looks kinda blotchy.

Silversoul (W) ~ For Approval
I'll re-do it later, but here's Silversoul. Right now, in rp, she's a queen, but here's her warrior pixel. Any questions? ...Besides that there's a ton of white pixels and it is crap, I realise that. Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  18:26, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Its too small. <font color="#000000" style="background:#FF0000">Harley <font color="#FF0000" style="#0d0d0d">Quinn 11:57, October 17, 2010 (UTC) Should we decline this? It's been up here for a while and nothing's been done. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  13:32, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Prey Hunter Blanks ~ For Approval
For the tribes. <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 22:25, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Make them bigger. But these are ... AMAZING!!! <font color="Orange" style="background:Black">Halloween <font color="Silver" style="background:Black">Sleepy Hollow <font color="White" style="background:Black">Woman in White 22:51, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Don't take this the wrong way, but the faces are too big. The eyes are droopy, and the paws, legs, and such are short, thin, and they just don't look right.<font color="#000000" style="background:#FF0000">Harley <font color="#FF0000" style="#0d0d0d">Quinn 20:45, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

They were orginally kit blanks, that's why they look as they do, but then we got new ones. I'll tell you what I'll make them bigger, and I'll fix the legs and eyes. But that's all that I'll do hold on. <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 19:21, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

My Computer won't let me upload them, I have to use a gallery! Sorry! <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 19:21, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

I got them! <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 19:29, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Err... the legs and tail need to be longer, still. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:06, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

The legs and tail need to be longer, and the head nees to be a little smaller. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Rogue Blanks - Redone


I redid the rogue blanks because the anatomy was seriously off. And they creeped me out. Comments? Elorisa ♥ Nic  23:54, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

I love :D  Sand  BOO...Trick or treat 00:04, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

They are nice, but my rogue blanks are really good. They are not creepy! Yours are great, too, but I spent A LONG time doing these blanks:

<font color="#000000" style="background:#FF0000">Harley <font color="#FF0000" style="#0d0d0d">Quinn 19:05, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

Hey, I probably spent a longer time on these, ust trying to get the anatomy at least a little correct. Anyway, on the only ones, the anatomy was seriously off, making them look a litte...weird. Elorisa ♥ Nic  20:06, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry 4pinkbear. But I agree that these look awesome, not that yours dosen't, of course (see my blanks above XD) but maybe a change isn't that bad. <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 21:14, October 26, 2010 (UTC)

See if you can make the blanks more catlike. They kind of look like wolves. Mist fire  03:11, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Hikari (Ki) ~ For Approval
I know she's no good, I'll redo it later. Anyway, here's Hikarikit. ^_^

Comments? Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  18:11, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is great :). Blur the shading some more. Creamsplash  The stars will never forget you.  19:49, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her legs and tail and add a little to her wings. <font color="Violet" style="background:Aquamarine">Dawnkit of DuskClan <font color="Thistle" >Poor little kit. 11:09, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Comments? Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  18:16, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Earpink seems a little too blurred. <font color="#797979" style="background:#86e4e5">Frostleaf <font color="#63c47c" >Thawed before she could blossom 18:19, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Creamsplash (A) - For Approval
Well, I finally got off my lazy bum and made her :). Comments? Creamsplash  The stars will never forget you.  19:49, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Where the brown meets the tan needs to be blurred more. <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 21:13, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

If you could smudge the belly like you did the shoulders and tail, that would be great. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Halloween (Rogue) - Withdrawn
I worked REALLY hard on him - I think he looks awesome!



What do you think? Berrypetal's about to have a litter that looks just like him - reserve your own kitten like this guy right away on my talkpage by 5:00 P.M TODAY! :D <font color="#CLC766FF" style="background:#f5ff66">Violetshadow: &quot;Death of a gentle rose...&quot;  18:28, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

He does look awesome! I am so reserving a kit! Although the back leg has a lot of messy black smears and the front legs could use cleaning up. Loveleaf Happy Halloween!  18:48, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs a massive amount of blurring on the black parts. Also the earpink color looks odd. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  20:40, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

let's Archive this. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Jayfrost (W) - For Approval
Here's Jayfrost! Any comments? <font color="#797979" style="background:#86e4e5">Frostleaf <font color="#63c47c" >Thawed before she could blossom 02:51, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm...blur the light circles a bit more...I think it's good but that.. <font face="Comic Sans MS"><font style="background:#68bebe; border:2px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Navy; -webkit-border-radius: 10px;"> Loveleaf   ♥  22:07, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred highlights. Mistfire Owl City! 18:47, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Lovely. Smudge the gray translation and it will be ready. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 18:57, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Smudged/blurred the white/gray transition. Mistfire Owl City! 19:10, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur tabby stripes then it will be ready ;)  Sand  Merry Christmas 12:35, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred stripes. Mistfire Owl City! 18:08, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Lightheart (W) ~ For Approval
<font color="Aquamarine" face="Monotype Corsiva" style="background:black">Love <font color="lime" face="Monotype Corsiva" style="background:black">leaf 20:15, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... I can't see any shading or highlights at all. And the stubby tail and scars look sloppy. Mistfire Owl City! 18:01, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

As Mistfire said, its REALLY sloppy work. No offense, but its really bad. The blurred fur is... not supposed to look like that. There is no shading. The right ear looks horrible. There is a lot of blurred lineart, and the tail...... well.... its not very good. Declining. Archiving. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 19:34, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is  NOT  declined just because it may be below standards. You just have to tell Loveleaf over here how to fix it.

Darken the shading, and if you need any help, you can ask me :-).

Yeah guys that is really rude the message above there. Anyways Loveleaf maybe re-do the white patches and smudge them and make sure there is no blurred lineart on the char art  Sand  Merry Christmas 12:35, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Birdpaw, Loveleaf, and Elorisa: I am NOT trying to be rude. I just stated my entirely honest opinion. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm. I say I did my job well. Lightheart is supossed to be slopp, sruffy, ugly and have weird spots. But I didn't shade it, now that I look at it. The tail IS supossed to look terrible. Thats the point. He's neglected and scared. I'm just going to fix shading, but that's it. Loveleaf. (This is really me)

If he's supposed to look scruffy, then you could be... neater about it. the lineart is more messed up than it should be. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Mistfang (W) ~ For Approval
Here's Mistfang. Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:35, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the shading less..I don't know, prominent? Other than that, I think it's good. <font face="Comic Sans MS"><font style="background:#68bebe; border:2px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Navy; -webkit-border-radius: 10px;"> Loveleaf   ♥  21:39, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm not sure if it's light enough. It looks like there's no shading in Pixlr. I added in some battle scars and shredded one of her ears. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:57, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Do you have a smudge tool? It's really good for battle scars, it's how I made mine above... <font face="Comic Sans MS"><font style="background:#68bebe; border:2px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Navy; -webkit-border-radius: 10px;"> Loveleaf   ♥  22:02, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded changed scar style and shading style. Also added in a few more scars. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 12:43, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the scars more prominent. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Bramblethorn (W) ~ For Approval
Yay! It's Bramblethorn, the cat who sacrificed hiomself to save young Flarepaw. Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 19:11, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the spike marks on the tail. Other than that, its AMAZING! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:02, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm not blurring them anymore than this because they might fade away if I do so. <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 23:15, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sparkleap (W) - For Approval
Okay, here's Sparkleap. I didn't know what color her eyes are, so I made them green. Mistfire Owl City! 22:13, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

She looks good! Her eyes are amber - I just forgot to add that! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 12:38, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry, I just can't get the new version to come up. Maybe I can nominate it for tweak week. Mistfire Owl City! 15:32, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind! Mistfire Owl City! 16:19, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay... now make the shading darker and blur the highlights. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 18:22, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Bumblestar (L) ~ For Approval
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

There's a big white spot on the chest. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Emberstrike (A) ~ For Approval
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Flarespark (Lo) ~ For Approval
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Katnisswing (Ki) ~ For﻿ Approval
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Mallowcloud (MC) ~ For Approval
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Mintfeather (L) ~ For Approval
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Snowflakepaw (Ki) ~ For Approval
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Sweetsplash (L) ~ For Approval
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Waterpaw (MCA) ~ For Approval
Comments? <font color="Red" >Merry Christmas! <font color="Green" >o3o 21:49, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Miley (Lo) ~ UFA
When we approve the loner blanks, I have this charart of my loner, who can be found in the Loners of the Forest talk page. <font color="Blue">You do understand <font color="Blue">I'm going to have to sick my  <font color="Blue">Gatomon on you, right?  13:01, July 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and I see whire pixels in some places. 4pinkbear 23:46, August 2, 2010 (UTC)

I'm reuplouding this, I've fixed the white pixels and blurred most of the shading. Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  15:25, December 7, 2010 (UTC)

Flowersplash (W) -for approval
Flowersplash.... so, what do you think? 15:50, December 13, 2010 (UTC)