Talk:Project Character Art

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Finchsong - For Approval
Hmm... Criticism? Comments? Mist fire  15:43, October 9, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the mark on the hind leg, the gray marks need blurred as well as the tail. Love leaf 19:33, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well? Frostleaf Thawed before she could blossom 01:51, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Well, make the stripes more of a real tabby pattern, like Bumblestar's (see below). Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Finchsong has darker streaks, not tabby stripes. Mistfire Owl City! 17:24, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

This has to be either archived or approved, this has been up for a long time. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Mistfire/sig}} 05:50, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Just darken the shading a bit more and she'll be ready. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  14:29, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

She isn't really good with me; no ginger cats are. Someone else can work on this. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:26, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

I've taken over. Comments? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  20:53, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good 'cept there's a blurred spot on the lineart for the hind leg closest to us. Other than that, I don't see nothin' wrong. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 21:08, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh! Pretteh! There's a bit of smudged lineart on the tail.  Mistfire Epic Fail  22:32, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Xigbar; The Freeshooter  21:15, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Very much! But her eyes are green.  Mistfire Epic Fail  21:25, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

They are green. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  21:42, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

They look blue... oh well, if 4pinkbear doesn't have anything to say, this should be approved.  Mistfire Spring rainfalls  22:23, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Made the eyes greener. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  01:27, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Swiftspot (W) - For Approval
leaf 17:03, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the black patches slightly darker. Other than that, its really good! Harley Quinn 11:58, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I kinda disagree. I think the colors are fine. Love leaf  13:49, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

It just needs to be a teeny-tiny bit darker. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Love leaf 20:09, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the body looks kinda blotchy.

That's all that I really see wrong with it; just smooth the shading out a bit Sky Storm's brewing... 23:42, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

RELOADED

♥Love <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf♥ 22:07, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Er...Bump 16:49, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Am I allowed to transfer this to the bottom? <span style="color:Aquamarine;font-family:Segoe Script;background:Blue;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aquamarine;">Loveleaf -.- My Talk!  16:20, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

I hope <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Segoe Script;background:green;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">Legend of Loveleaf!  Dodongo Dislikes Smoke  14:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Hikari (Ki) ~ For Approval
I know she's no good, I'll redo it later. Anyway, here's Hikarikit. ^_^

Comments? Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  18:11, October 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is great :). Blur the shading some more. Creamsplash  The stars will never forget you.  19:49, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her legs and tail and add a little to her wings. <font color="Violet" style="background:Aquamarine">Dawnkit of DuskClan <font color="Thistle" >Poor little kit. 11:09, October 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Comments? Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  18:16, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Earpink seems a little too blurred. <font color="#797979" style="background:#86e4e5">Frostleaf <font color="#63c47c" >Thawed before she could blossom 18:19, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Earpink is unatural. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

How so? Desu~ Suiseiseki and Souseiseki together 4eva!  14:07, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is too purple. It needs to be a salmony pink. <font color="Silver" >☯Silver <font color="Goldenrod" >Bells☮ 14:12, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading on the the wings and a teeny-tiny bit on her forehead, where the fur sticks up. Work on this or it will be declined. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lightheart (W) ~ For Approval
<font color="Aquamarine" face="Monotype Corsiva" style="background:black">Love <font color="lime" face="Monotype Corsiva" style="background:black">leaf 20:15, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... I can't see any shading or highlights at all. And the stubby tail and scars look sloppy. Mistfire Owl City! 18:01, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

As Mistfire said, its REALLY sloppy work. No offense, but its really bad. The blurred fur is... not supposed to look like that. There is no shading. The right ear looks horrible. There is a lot of blurred lineart, and the tail...... well.... its not very good. Declining. Archiving. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 19:34, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is  NOT  declined just because it may be below standards. You just have to tell Loveleaf over here how to fix it.

Darken the shading, and if you need any help, you can ask me :-).

Yeah guys that is really rude the message above there. Anyways Loveleaf maybe re-do the white patches and smudge them and make sure there is no blurred lineart on the char art  Sand  Merry Christmas 12:35, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Birdpaw, Loveleaf, and Elorisa: I am NOT trying to be rude. I just stated my entirely honest opinion. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm. I say I did my job well. Lightheart is supossed to be slopp, sruffy, ugly and have weird spots. But I didn't shade it, now that I look at it. The tail IS supossed to look terrible. Thats the point. He's neglected and scared. I'm just going to fix shading, but that's it. Loveleaf. (This is really me)

If he's supposed to look scruffy, then you could be... neater about it. the lineart is more messed up than it should be. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the head and belly. Sky Storm's brewing... 20:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The spots are supossed to look like that and he is supossed to look un-neat. Forget it. I'm withdrawling it, because nothing going to happen to it. Not mad, just saying the truth: It is not going to get accepted. <font face="Comic Sans MS"><font style="background:Red; border:2px solid -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; Navy; -webkit-border-radius: 10px;"> Loveleaf   ♦  20:50, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I took it over. I darkened the shading.

Loveleaf: Does it still look scruffy enough? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  21:26, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes need fixing. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The spots were supossed to be like that, it dosen't look like him now, but other than that, and the ear, I guess it's fine, although the spots need to be changed back. Sorry. Loveleaf (Forgot to sign in)

'''Reuploaded. '''Tried again. Comments? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  17:25, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the scars.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  02:50, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

The eye has a white spot on it..<span style="color:yellow;font-family:Segoe Script;background:green;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">Legend of Loveleaf! Dodongo Dislikes Smoke  14:30, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sparkleap (W) - For Approval
Okay, here's Sparkleap. I didn't know what color her eyes are, so I made them green. Mistfire Owl City! 22:13, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

She looks good! Her eyes are amber - I just forgot to add that! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 12:38, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry, I just can't get the new version to come up. Maybe I can nominate it for tweak week. Mistfire Owl City! 15:32, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind! Mistfire Owl City! 16:19, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay... now make the shading darker and blur the highlights. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 18:22, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Mistfire Owl City! 18:59, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  20:45, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened shading. ℳĨ₰₮ ₣ĨȒ€ Happy New Year!  16:36, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Rockclaw (W) - For Approval
This sucks. Comments? Demyx; The Melodious Nocturne  02:02, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, it looks good! I&#39;m Still Phoenixfeather13! 16:11, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Good! Just make the earpink a more mauve pink color. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:26, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  13:55, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Goldenwish (W) - For Approval
This is my first one, I've been told that apprentices are allowed to post. Hope I did alright for a beginner! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   00:18, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

It's beautiful, Leafbreeze! In fact, all it really needs is the golden patches to be blurred just a tad, and earpink, too. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 12:37, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the shading, make the highlights brighter, and it looks sorta crosseyed. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 14:58, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I've reuploaded the image. Oh, that means so much to me from you, 4pinkbear! Does it look better? I did what I could about the highlights, but it's difficult to tell since she's motly white. I fixed it's eyes, and just zoom it on your computer and it's not cosseyed. I had alot of fun making her! I'm excited to make more. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   21:36, February 5, 2011 (UTC)

I say its going under CBA! It's really good for a beginner at chararts! <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 15:19, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

I agree! It looks amazing! Awesome job Leafbreeze! Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 18:15, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, thank you, Sky! I tried my best! Does that mean I can put it on her page now, 4pinkbear? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   20:19, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

You're welcome! :) You can prob'ly put it up tomorrow after CBA gets over with, unless 4pinkbear says otherwise. Again, amazing job! Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:27, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

I'll start working on another one, then. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   20:30, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the face hi-lite.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  14:55, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading near the tail and rump(xD). Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

SunriseFeather(W)-For Approval
Kay, here's my 1st character art as an apprentice: Hope you guys like it!Cardinalfire1234 23:10, February 6, 2011 (UTC)CardinalFire1234

This looks wonderful! I've always pictured her long-haired, so change the blank. And make the scar lower, and extend partly onto her muzzle (Like this~, partly on her forehead and nose, basically.) Otherwise, looks great! Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  02:41, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

I have a suggestion: maybe we should post the pic of Saix whenever one of our members breaks the rules? Cardinalfire, your charart looks great. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  00:55, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

That'd be awesome xD. Let's take it up with the rest of the admins, to see if i'd be alright. Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  01:56, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

It's too small, and blurry. Make the pupils thicker.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  02:50, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Mew Lavenderwolf (W) ~ For Approval
Fail shading. Can someone help with that. Otherwise, comments? Mew Mew  Zakuro  23:19, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks a little...dark. I can't tell that well where the eyes come from, though the tail looks okay. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:22, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened her a bit and fixed her eyes. She's supposed to be dark gray, though. Cansomeone help with blurring the shading. I'm not sure if the new image is up, though. Mew Mew  Zakuro  23:28, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Er...no, I don't think it's up. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:32, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

It's up. I'm not lightening her. She's dark gray, and this is dark gray. Mew Mew  Zakuro  23:36, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, it looks a little better. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:40, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think the tail she be a more purplish-grey. Like this:

Use it if you want. This is only a minor tweak/suggestion. Mew Mew Ichigo I'm here to protect the Earth ~nya!  16:15, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Not to offend you, Dove, but...Destiny-san did make a pretty good one above. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  22:26, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Mew Puddingpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Her tail wasn't as good as I thought, but comments? Mew Mew  Zakuro  23:19, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it a tad more near the tail, if you can. It looks fine, otherwise. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:24, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Mew Mew   Zakuro  23:36, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Better. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:42, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Puddingpaw is SUCH a cute name! enlarge the earpink and brighten hi-lites.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Waterpelt (W) - For approval
Darker fur is much more difficult than white fur! I worked harder on this one than my last one, I hope it looks okay! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:31, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks awesome, Leafbreeze! Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:33, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, thank you so much! I'm pretty relieved that it's not as horrible with the shading as I'd thought it would be. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   22:49, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Could you fix this font? Anyways, looks real good, but ya need to blur the shading a bit. Keep up the good work! Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 00:13, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded and fixed the font! Does it look better? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:01, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for fixing that. :) Yeah, looks better, maybe blur it just a tad more if you can. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 00:13, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

It looks good. Like Sky said, blur it a tad more. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 12:58, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded...better? I couldn't do much, but I did what I could. How do I know when I can put it on her page? 4pinkbear hasn't said anything yet... <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   18:33, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Better. You can put him on his page after CBA. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:04, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur EVERYTHING.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did what I could as not to mess up the rest. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   21:38, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Still blur shading, it's like, too dark.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  02:50, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   18:03, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

This is a lot better! There's some sort of stray highlight on the head, might want to blur it out.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:47, February 23, 2011 (UTC) 'Reuploaded. 'Like that? That's for helping me with the shading, Mistfire, it'd never occured to me to lighten it for some reason... <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   17:06, February 23, 2011 (UTC) Blur the shading. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Mew Mintobreath (W) ~ For approval
Major fail. I hate the shading and the eyes. On the plus side, I did the wings pretty well, right? But I'll redo them some other day. If some one could do it instead, then that'd be a big help. Comments? Mew Mew Ichigo I'm here to protect the Earth ~nya!  16:18, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks nice, and I like the eyes. I like the purple wings too! :) <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   16:40, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

It looks good. Just blur near the wings. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 00:06, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Not to offend you, but this has to be declined, because it is too small. If you can redo it in 2 days, I will take off the Decline and put it back up for approval. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 00:09, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Personally, I would blur the shading more. Other than that, it is SOOOOO cool!Cardinalfire1234 01:02, February 8, 2011 (UTC)CardinalFire1234

I've made it again. this time, I've used the long haired blanks. Mew Mew Pudding Crazy little monkey girl, na no da~  22:47, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

It might be a bit fuzzy, but so it can be seen, I've made it 200px. Mew Mew Pudding Crazy little monkey girl, na no da~  22:50, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

It's too small, again. Darkfire is a very bad  kitty-thingy-mer-bobber! :D  22:50, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Clean up the white pixels on the wings.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  04:07, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Mountainwhisper (W) - For approval
I think I've done better, but he's better than he could be. I had a tough time with the shading on the white on his back. I hope he look's nice, he's one of my favorites! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   16:53, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

He doesn't look nice, he looks awesome! Darken the shading on his head a bit though, and blur the white just a bit more. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 18:31, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

I've reuploaded it. Thank you, Sky! I'm excited to see what 4pinkbear think of him and Waterpelt! Does it look better? Speaking of Mountainwhisper, do you want to roleplay him? No one else has asked yet, and I like how you roleplay Foreststep. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   19:06, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, the shading looks better, it just needs blurred a bit, and there's a white line under the ear pink on his right ear. And sure, I'd love to roleplay him! You're doing great! Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:00, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Oops! I forgot to blend the right ear! Thanks for pointing that out, Sky! I know it still has it there, but I swear that in my pictures file it's different! Why didn't it change even though it's be reuploaded? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:07, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno, Leaf. However, you did pretty good on this. That, I can't deny. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:36, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Really? Thank you, Phoenix! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:40, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

No problem. Again, just blur the shading near the right ear, and it looks amazing. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 00:00, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll do hat tomorrow, I need to go. Thanks for you comments and support! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   00:03, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I blurred the shading near his ear, finaly got the white line on his ear to disappear, how does he look? Can I put him on his page? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   18:37, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. :) You can put him on his page after he goes through CBA. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:05, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

And 4pinkbear has to post a comment below saying it's up for CBA before I can put it on the page, right? Okay, thanks! I'll wait. :) <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   22:37, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all shading and hi-lites.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   21:40, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur white patches. And Leafbreeze, it's 4pinkbear. She's really sensitive about her name.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  04:07, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Spelling error, sorry O_O ! Am I ever going to be able to get things righ on here? I;m sorry for screwing up so much :( Does he look better? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   17:56, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Everyone makes mistakes now and again, Leaf. :) And yes, he looks better. He looks really... can you call a tom 'beautiful'? Handsome, there we go, that's better! :) Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 20:37, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe, thanks, Sky :) I suppose you could call a tom beautiful if it was in real life and at a cat show...Ah, well. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   22:30, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Blur where the white meets the gray.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  21:13, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! Better? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   21:30, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?

Mew Lettucewave (W) ~ For Approval
Here's Mew Lettucewave. The antennae are supposed to be white, but I've made them grey so they can be seen. I think I did better on her than Mew Mintobreath. Comments? Mew Mew Ichigo I'm here to protect the Earth ~nya!  16:57, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the burn tool wasn't working so I had to draw in all the shaded areas. Mew Mew Ichigo I'm here to protect the Earth ~nya!  16:58, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, wow, you've done a wonderful job on the antennae! It looks wonderful, I love it! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   18:16, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

You did fine, though as soon as possible, and I mean this in the nicest way possible, try again on it so it doesn't look...blurred. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 22:18, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Cricketspark (W) - For approval
All the others I have posted on here are approved, so here's Cricketspark! Prob'ly too dark, huh? Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:19, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah...too dark. No offense, Sky, but I can't see the mouth or where the outlines are. The earpink looks a little bright, but it looks fine otherwise. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 22:15, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''No offense taken Phoenix! I thought she might've been too dark. Better? Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:06, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Much. Though I still can't see the mouth. Looks good otherwise. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 22:25, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Good, but too dark.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Redriver (W) - For approval
And here's Redriver... I kinda like her, though I think I mighta messed up on the ears. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:34, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

No,no! She looks so cool! Wait, I am allowed to post my comments on these things when I'm a kit, right. If not SORRY!Cardinalfire1234 21:37, February 7, 2011 (UTC)CardinalFire1234

Blur it close to the ears. It looks fine otherwise. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 22:16, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:09, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

The line near the ears. Otherwise, it's amazing. ♥Mew Mew Phoenix feather!♥  22:42, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

What line near the ears? Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:20, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Nevermind. It looks awesome. ♥Mew Mew Phoenix feather!♥  21:38, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

She's pretty good, but looks a little crosseyed.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Zoom in. She's not crosseyed. Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 20:39, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, then. Make earpink more mauve pink.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  04:07, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be darker. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Segoe Script;background:green;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">Legend of Loveleaf! Dodongo Dislikes Smoke  14:32, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Moonpelt (MC) ~ For approval
I personally think something's wrong with the short haired female warrior blanks. While I'm editing it, it'll sometimes just start to go blurry. That's why my previous chararts with them look odd. Could someone please fix them for me? But, for now, here's the MewClan medicine cat. I actually really like this one. Comments? Mew Mew Ichigo I'm here to protect the Earth ~nya!  17:30, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

The image is too small. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 21:40, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

I've made it 200px, though it might look a bit fuzzy. Mew Mew Ichigo I'm here to protect the Earth ~nya!  21:49, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. ♥Mew Mew Phoenix feather!♥  22:27, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Grassfrost (MC) - For approval
I made this since Cardinalfire's was declined...I hope she looks alright. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   22:02, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! ♥Phoenix feather!♥  22:16, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Phoenixfeather! I'm pretty satisfied with the eyes, I was worried they wouldn't look okay. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:42, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Give her hi-lites.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I gave her highlights, but the don't show on her fur color! Any ideas on how to fix that? If you want to see the highlights, tip your screen back... <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   00:41, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, this should be declined because you already have three chararts up for approval.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  15:00, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

This is my third. Goldenwish was my first ever, and was put up for CBA by 4pinkbear. Waterpelt, Mountainwhisper, and Grassfrost are the only ones I have now that aren't yet approved. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   21:21, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. ' <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   21:41, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great, just blur the shadows and highlights. <font color="blue" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">♥Love <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf♥ 21:50, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you, Loveleaf! She was hard to make. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:22, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

How about you take the smudge tool and slightly smudge it. The highlighs are really kinda dark, so you need to distrubutite it. At least it's what I do, I don't know if you use a different technique, so It may not work... <font color="blue" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">♥Love <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf♥ 23:27, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Your comment really really helped me improve it! Thank you! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:36, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Your welcome, I'm sorry for critting it so much, it's really annoying, I know, I've had it done to me too. But here's something that may help you.

<font color="blue" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">♥Love <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf♥ 23:47, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

''Reuploaded. ''I tried just now, but it turned out just to make the shading on her stomach darker and more...horrible. It doesn't look as good as yours, with our without smudged lineart! Don't worry about the "critting", I won't learn other wise. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:57, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

She looks so cool! Yours is WAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYY better than mine! Nice job.Cardinalfire1234 00:00, February 14, 2011 (UTC)CardinalFire1234

She does, dosen't she? The only thing I can think of is that if you do the smae thing but only with a blur tool. Other than that...I don't know... <font color="blue" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">♥Love <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf♥ 00:02, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Because I used the finger blur tool and went up and down, like you said, and it went EVERYWHERE! :) So I tried again a few more times and it turned out like I posted above. Yours looks great too, Cardinalfire, white cats are just hard to do. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   15:54, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Leafbreeze, You can only have 3 up for approval. You already have 3 up.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  04:07, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry I'm not posting anymore until one of these are approved. I appreciate you reminding me, though, I can easily forget those things ^_^ <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   17:50, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedshadow (MC) ~ For Approval
Here's Spottedshadow, the SeaClan meddy cat! Comments?  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  18:11, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

There are a few white pixels on the art. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  18:15, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  17:10, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not being cruel here, but there are still a few near her front left paw and tail. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  17:45, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Haha, you're not being cruel at all.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  20:31, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  21:01, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Dovepelt (W) ~ For Approval
And Dovepelt! Comments?  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  18:11, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I see two places that just..bugs me :)

One is the eye closest to the tail, and on the front leg that is on the ground, there is some smudged lineart. <font color="blue" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">♥Love <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf♥ 21:48, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good...except for the smudged art. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  01:38, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed smudged art.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  17:11, February 19, 2011 (UTC) CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lettucepetal(W)- For Approval


Here's Lettucepetal of PearlClan! I'm really happy with how she turned out. Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 15:46, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

She's beautiful, Sky! I never thought a green cat would look so natural! :) <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   15:50, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Leafbreeze! Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 15:55, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Just add depth to the eyes.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  04:07, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 20:34, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

She's beautiful! Only blur where the white meets the green on the paw.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  16:52, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, but what happened with the ears? How come one is "Leaking" out, and the other has normal lineart around it.

Pardon? Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 20:44, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

The ear furthest from the tail has no bottom lineart, and it is slowly blurred into the green. The other, however, has lineart on the bottom. <span style="color:Aquamarine;font-family:Segoe Script;background:Blue;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aquamarine;">Loveleaf -.- My Talk!  20:49, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oh. S'just the way the lineart was made. If you look at the cat above, you'll see he's the same. Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 20:53, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

oh...Sorry. I'll thing I'm going to submit that idea for tweak week. <span style="color:Aquamarine;font-family:Segoe Script;background:Blue;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aquamarine;">Loveleaf -.- My Talk!  20:54, February 20, 2011 (UTC) CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Smokestar (L) - Up For Approval
Here's Smokestar, the loyal leader of SeaClan. Comments?  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  18:40, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

It looks beautiful, Mistfire. It looks a little like flower petals are falling on her. Nothing I see needs work. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  19:31, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

How do get the gray to sort of blend in streaks into the tail? Surely you didn't use the fungure blur tool? I've always wonder how you guys do that... <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   22:20, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes need to be slightly blurred, but only the highights and shadings in them. You know, the rows of yellow colors. Darkfire is a very bad  kitty-thingy-mer-bobber! :D  12:46, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Phoenix: Thanks! But - it's a he :3.

Leafbreeze: I got the gray to blend in by using the smudge tool on 40-50%. It's the button that looks like the little finger.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  01:18, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, okay, I get it now! Thank you, Mistfire! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   16:10, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Oh. I always get confused with the female and male blanks. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  22:05, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Lionclaw (W)~For Approval
Here is Lionclaw. Shinystar: Hong Kong, my home, the Eastern Pearl!  09:45, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Change it to a full-size image. And add highlights and shading, and blur those darker patches.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  01:37, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Shinystar (L)~For Approval
Here is Shinystar, my firsts charart. Comments/critism?<font color="Navy Blue">♥Shinystar♥ The Beautiful Silver Cat 02:27, February 2, 2011 (UTC)



Blur and slightly smudge the stripes. Add massive shhading and highlights, And, not to offend your in anyway, the eyes sorta creep me out. Make them touch the bottom of the charart's eye lineart. Add shine and depth in the eye, make the earpink much lighter, blur it, and then it should be good. <font color="#3399FF" style="background:#336000">The New Prophecies: The Next Generation of Powers 10:43, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not offended or anything. I was sure that I would recieve critism for my first charart. I will do it later. <font color="Orange">Phoenixsong ♥ A sweet phoenix's song♥ 02:35, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm...needs some shading and the ear pink looks off, but the eyes remind me of Weegee. Phoenixfeather13--Blazing Through Winter 16:18, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Needs shading/hi-lites, add depth to the eyes, and blur stripes.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  04:07, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-done. Shinystar: Hong Kong, my home, the Eastern Pearl!  10:56, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes look better, but you still need to blur the stripes and add shading/highlights.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:59, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-done again. Shinystar: Hong Kong, my home, the Eastern Pearl!  02:41, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

How do you add shading and highlights? (I made another one because I didn't like the color of the stripes.) Shiny  star  09:31, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

I moved it to the bottom because no one is answering *gives a sigh*. Lily "The best mother ever!"  01:25, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

It looks good, just blur it a little. ♥Phoenixfeather: Spring is Almost Here!♥  11:57, March 26, 2011 (UTC)