Talk:Project Character Art/Archive 6

Swiftspot (W) - Approved
leaf 17:03, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the black patches slightly darker. Other than that, its really good! Harley Quinn 11:58, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I kinda disagree. I think the colors are fine. Love leaf  13:49, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

It just needs to be a teeny-tiny bit darker. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Love leaf 20:09, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the body looks kinda blotchy.

That's all that I really see wrong with it; just smooth the shading out a bit Sky Storm's brewing... 23:42, December 16, 2010 (UTC) RELOADED

♥Love leaf♥ 22:07, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Er...Bump 16:49, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Am I allowed to transfer this to the bottom? Loveleaf -.- My Talk!  16:20, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

I hope Legend of Loveleaf!  Dodongo Dislikes Smoke  14:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

It's been 24 hours. Is this approved? I've waited forever XD Loveleaf! "Ish? What in Glaux's name is 'ish'?"  15:23, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lightheart (W) ~ Approved
Love leaf 20:15, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... I can't see any shading or highlights at all. And the stubby tail and scars look sloppy. Mistfire Owl City! 18:01, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

As Mistfire said, its REALLY sloppy work. No offense, but its really bad. The blurred fur is... not supposed to look like that. There is no shading. The right ear looks horrible. There is a lot of blurred lineart, and the tail...... well.... its not very good. Declining. Archiving. Christmasheart 19:34, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is  NOT  declined just because it may be below standards. You just have to tell Loveleaf over here how to fix it.

Darken the shading, and if you need any help, you can ask me :-).

Yeah guys that is really rude the message above there. Anyways Loveleaf maybe re-do the white patches and smudge them and make sure there is no blurred lineart on the char art  Sand  Merry Christmas 12:35, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Birdpaw, Loveleaf, and Elorisa: I am NOT trying to be rude. I just stated my entirely honest opinion. Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm. I say I did my job well. Lightheart is supossed to be slopp, sruffy, ugly and have weird spots. But I didn't shade it, now that I look at it. The tail IS supossed to look terrible. Thats the point. He's neglected and scared. I'm just going to fix shading, but that's it. Loveleaf. (This is really me)

If he's supposed to look scruffy, then you could be... neater about it. the lineart is more messed up than it should be. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the head and belly. Sky Storm's brewing... 20:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The spots are supossed to look like that and he is supossed to look un-neat. Forget it. I'm withdrawling it, because nothing going to happen to it. Not mad, just saying the truth: It is not going to get accepted.  Loveleaf   ♦  20:50, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I took it over. I darkened the shading.

Loveleaf: Does it still look scruffy enough? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  21:26, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes need fixing. Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The spots were supossed to be like that, it dosen't look like him now, but other than that, and the ear, I guess it's fine, although the spots need to be changed back. Sorry. Loveleaf (Forgot to sign in)

'''Reuploaded. '''Tried again. Comments? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  17:25, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the scars.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  02:50, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

The eye has a white spot on it..<span style="color:yellow;font-family:Segoe Script;background:green;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">Legend of Loveleaf! Dodongo Dislikes Smoke  14:30, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and Love, they're supposed to have white in them ^^ Axel;  The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:36, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

I know, but there was a white glob on the lineart. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Segoe Script;background:green;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">Legend of Loveleaf! Dodongo Dislikes Smoke  14:37, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think I fixed that. Oops ^^. Sorry. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:41, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

It's really nice, you know, I remember when we first had this little, ah, "Discussion". I was really mad XD. But it looks great. I just wanted a cat who WAS ugly and gave off...er....ugliness. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Segoe Script;background:green;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">Legend of Loveleaf! Dodongo Dislikes Smoke  14:49, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Love ^^. And I understand completely. You were right to be mad. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:54, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

No problemo. Alright, I think he's finally ready for CBA~ So CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:58, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks and your welcome. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Segoe Script;background:green;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">Legend of Loveleaf! Dodongo Dislikes Smoke  14:56, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Work on this or it will be declined. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sparkleap (W) - Approved
Okay, here's Sparkleap. I didn't know what color her eyes are, so I made them green. Mistfire Owl City! 22:13, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

She looks good! Her eyes are amber - I just forgot to add that! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 12:38, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry, I just can't get the new version to come up. Maybe I can nominate it for tweak week. Mistfire Owl City! 15:32, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind! Mistfire Owl City! 16:19, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay... now make the shading darker and blur the highlights. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 18:22, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Mistfire Owl City! 18:59, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  20:45, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened shading. ℳĨ₰₮ ₣ĨȒ€ Happy New Year!  16:36, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Rockclaw (W) - Approved
This sucks. Comments? Demyx; The Melodious Nocturne  02:02, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, it looks good! I&#39;m Still Phoenixfeather13! 16:11, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Good! Just make the earpink a more mauve pink color. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:26, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  13:55, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Mountainwhisper (W) - Approved
I think I've done better, but he's better than he could be. I had a tough time with the shading on the white on his back. I hope he look's nice, he's one of my favorites! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   16:53, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

He doesn't look nice, he looks awesome! Darken the shading on his head a bit though, and blur the white just a bit more. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 18:31, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

I've reuploaded it. Thank you, Sky! I'm excited to see what 4pinkbear think of him and Waterpelt! Does it look better? Speaking of Mountainwhisper, do you want to roleplay him? No one else has asked yet, and I like how you roleplay Foreststep. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   19:06, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, the shading looks better, it just needs blurred a bit, and there's a white line under the ear pink on his right ear. And sure, I'd love to roleplay him! You're doing great! Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:00, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Oops! I forgot to blend the right ear! Thanks for pointing that out, Sky! I know it still has it there, but I swear that in my pictures file it's different! Why didn't it change even though it's be reuploaded? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:07, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno, Leaf. However, you did pretty good on this. That, I can't deny. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:36, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Really? Thank you, Phoenix! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:40, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

No problem. Again, just blur the shading near the right ear, and it looks amazing. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 00:00, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll do hat tomorrow, I need to go. Thanks for you comments and support! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   00:03, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I blurred the shading near his ear, finaly got the white line on his ear to disappear, how does he look? Can I put him on his page? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   18:37, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. :) You can put him on his page after he goes through CBA. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:05, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

And 4pinkbear has to post a comment below saying it's up for CBA before I can put it on the page, right? Okay, thanks! I'll wait. :) <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   22:37, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all shading and hi-lites.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   21:40, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur white patches. And Leafbreeze, it's 4pinkbear. She's really sensitive about her name.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  04:07, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Spelling error, sorry O_O ! Am I ever going to be able to get things righ on here? I;m sorry for screwing up so much :( Does he look better? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   17:56, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Everyone makes mistakes now and again, Leaf. :) And yes, he looks better. He looks really... can you call a tom 'beautiful'? Handsome, there we go, that's better! :) Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 20:37, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe, thanks, Sky :) I suppose you could call a tom beautiful if it was in real life and at a cat show...Ah, well. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   22:30, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Blur where the white meets the gray.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  21:13, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! Better? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   21:30, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedshadow (MC) ~ Approved
Here's Spottedshadow, the SeaClan meddy cat! Comments?  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  18:11, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

There are a few white pixels on the art. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  18:15, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  17:10, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not being cruel here, but there are still a few near her front left paw and tail. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  17:45, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Haha, you're not being cruel at all.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  20:31, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  21:01, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Dovepelt (W) ~ Approved
And Dovepelt! Comments?  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  18:11, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I see two places that just..bugs me :)

One is the eye closest to the tail, and on the front leg that is on the ground, there is some smudged lineart. <font color="blue" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">♥Love <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf♥ 21:48, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good...except for the smudged art. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  01:38, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed smudged art.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  17:11, February 19, 2011 (UTC) CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lettucepetal (W) - Approved


Here's Lettucepetal of PearlClan! I'm really happy with how she turned out. Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 15:46, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

She's beautiful, Sky! I never thought a green cat would look so natural! :) <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   15:50, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Leafbreeze! Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 15:55, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Just add depth to the eyes.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  04:07, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 20:34, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

She's beautiful! Only blur where the white meets the green on the paw.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  16:52, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, but what happened with the ears? How come one is "Leaking" out, and the other has normal lineart around it.

Pardon? Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 20:44, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

The ear furthest from the tail has no bottom lineart, and it is slowly blurred into the green. The other, however, has lineart on the bottom. <span style="color:Aquamarine;font-family:Segoe Script;background:Blue;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aquamarine;">Loveleaf -.- My Talk!  20:49, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oh. S'just the way the lineart was made. If you look at the cat above, you'll see he's the same. Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 20:53, February 20, 2011 (UTC) oh...Sorry. I'll thing I'm going to submit that idea for tweak week. <span style="color:Aquamarine;font-family:Segoe Script;background:Blue;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aquamarine;">Loveleaf -.- My Talk!  20:54, February 20, 2011 (UTC) CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Smokestar (L) - Approved
Here's Smokestar, the loyal leader of SeaClan. Comments?  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  18:40, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

It looks beautiful, Mistfire. It looks a little like flower petals are falling on her. Nothing I see needs work. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  19:31, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

How do get the gray to sort of blend in streaks into the tail? Surely you didn't use the fungure blur tool? I've always wonder how you guys do that... <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   22:20, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes need to be slightly blurred, but only the highights and shadings in them. You know, the rows of yellow colors. Darkfire is a very bad  kitty-thingy-mer-bobber! :D  12:46, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Phoenix: Thanks! But - it's a he :3.

Leafbreeze: I got the gray to blend in by using the smudge tool on 40-50%. It's the button that looks like the little finger.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  01:18, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, okay, I get it now! Thank you, Mistfire! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   16:10, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Oh. I always get confused with the female and male blanks. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  22:05, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)