Talk:Project Character Art/Archive 6

Swiftspot (W) - Approved
leaf 17:03, October 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the black patches slightly darker. Other than that, its really good! Harley Quinn 11:58, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I kinda disagree. I think the colors are fine. Love leaf  13:49, October 17, 2010 (UTC)

It just needs to be a teeny-tiny bit darker. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Love leaf 20:09, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the body looks kinda blotchy.

That's all that I really see wrong with it; just smooth the shading out a bit Sky Storm's brewing... 23:42, December 16, 2010 (UTC) RELOADED

♥Love leaf♥ 22:07, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Er...Bump 16:49, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Am I allowed to transfer this to the bottom? Loveleaf -.- My Talk!  16:20, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

I hope Legend of Loveleaf!  Dodongo Dislikes Smoke  14:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

It's been 24 hours. Is this approved? I've waited forever XD Loveleaf! "Ish? What in Glaux's name is 'ish'?"  15:23, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lightheart (W) ~ Approved
Love leaf 20:15, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... I can't see any shading or highlights at all. And the stubby tail and scars look sloppy. Mistfire Owl City! 18:01, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

As Mistfire said, its REALLY sloppy work. No offense, but its really bad. The blurred fur is... not supposed to look like that. There is no shading. The right ear looks horrible. There is a lot of blurred lineart, and the tail...... well.... its not very good. Declining. Archiving. Christmasheart 19:34, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is  NOT  declined just because it may be below standards. You just have to tell Loveleaf over here how to fix it.

Darken the shading, and if you need any help, you can ask me :-).

Yeah guys that is really rude the message above there. Anyways Loveleaf maybe re-do the white patches and smudge them and make sure there is no blurred lineart on the char art  Sand  Merry Christmas 12:35, November 29, 2010 (UTC)

Birdpaw, Loveleaf, and Elorisa: I am NOT trying to be rude. I just stated my entirely honest opinion. Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm. I say I did my job well. Lightheart is supossed to be slopp, sruffy, ugly and have weird spots. But I didn't shade it, now that I look at it. The tail IS supossed to look terrible. Thats the point. He's neglected and scared. I'm just going to fix shading, but that's it. Loveleaf. (This is really me)

If he's supposed to look scruffy, then you could be... neater about it. the lineart is more messed up than it should be. Mistfire Owl City! 03:31, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the head and belly. Sky Storm's brewing... 20:35, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The spots are supossed to look like that and he is supossed to look un-neat. Forget it. I'm withdrawling it, because nothing going to happen to it. Not mad, just saying the truth: It is not going to get accepted.  Loveleaf   ♦  20:50, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I took it over. I darkened the shading.

Loveleaf: Does it still look scruffy enough? Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  21:26, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes need fixing. Christmasheart 22:17, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

The spots were supossed to be like that, it dosen't look like him now, but other than that, and the ear, I guess it's fine, although the spots need to be changed back. Sorry. Loveleaf (Forgot to sign in)

'''Reuploaded. '''Tried again. Comments? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  17:25, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the scars.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  02:50, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

The eye has a white spot on it..<span style="color:yellow;font-family:Segoe Script;background:green;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">Legend of Loveleaf! Dodongo Dislikes Smoke  14:30, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and Love, they're supposed to have white in them ^^ Axel;  The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:36, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

I know, but there was a white glob on the lineart. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Segoe Script;background:green;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">Legend of Loveleaf! Dodongo Dislikes Smoke  14:37, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think I fixed that. Oops ^^. Sorry. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:41, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

It's really nice, you know, I remember when we first had this little, ah, "Discussion". I was really mad XD. But it looks great. I just wanted a cat who WAS ugly and gave off...er....ugliness. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Segoe Script;background:green;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">Legend of Loveleaf! Dodongo Dislikes Smoke  14:49, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Love ^^. And I understand completely. You were right to be mad. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:54, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

No problemo. Alright, I think he's finally ready for CBA~ So CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:58, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks and your welcome. <span style="color:yellow;font-family:Segoe Script;background:green;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:yellow;">Legend of Loveleaf! Dodongo Dislikes Smoke  14:56, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Work on this or it will be declined. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sparkleap (W) - Approved
Okay, here's Sparkleap. I didn't know what color her eyes are, so I made them green. Mistfire Owl City! 22:13, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

She looks good! Her eyes are amber - I just forgot to add that! <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 12:38, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry, I just can't get the new version to come up. Maybe I can nominate it for tweak week. Mistfire Owl City! 15:32, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind! Mistfire Owl City! 16:19, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay... now make the shading darker and blur the highlights. <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 18:22, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Mistfire Owl City! 18:59, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  20:45, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened shading. ℳĨ₰₮ ₣ĨȒ€ Happy New Year!  16:36, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Rockclaw (W) - Approved
This sucks. Comments? Demyx; The Melodious Nocturne  02:02, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, it looks good! I&#39;m Still Phoenixfeather13! 16:11, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Good! Just make the earpink a more mauve pink color. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:26, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  13:55, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Mountainwhisper (W) - Approved
I think I've done better, but he's better than he could be. I had a tough time with the shading on the white on his back. I hope he look's nice, he's one of my favorites! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   16:53, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

He doesn't look nice, he looks awesome! Darken the shading on his head a bit though, and blur the white just a bit more. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 18:31, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

I've reuploaded it. Thank you, Sky! I'm excited to see what 4pinkbear think of him and Waterpelt! Does it look better? Speaking of Mountainwhisper, do you want to roleplay him? No one else has asked yet, and I like how you roleplay Foreststep. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   19:06, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, the shading looks better, it just needs blurred a bit, and there's a white line under the ear pink on his right ear. And sure, I'd love to roleplay him! You're doing great! Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:00, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Oops! I forgot to blend the right ear! Thanks for pointing that out, Sky! I know it still has it there, but I swear that in my pictures file it's different! Why didn't it change even though it's be reuploaded? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:07, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno, Leaf. However, you did pretty good on this. That, I can't deny. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:36, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Really? Thank you, Phoenix! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   23:40, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

No problem. Again, just blur the shading near the right ear, and it looks amazing. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 00:00, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll do hat tomorrow, I need to go. Thanks for you comments and support! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   00:03, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I blurred the shading near his ear, finaly got the white line on his ear to disappear, how does he look? Can I put him on his page? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   18:37, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. :) You can put him on his page after he goes through CBA. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:05, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

And 4pinkbear has to post a comment below saying it's up for CBA before I can put it on the page, right? Okay, thanks! I'll wait. :) <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   22:37, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all shading and hi-lites.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   21:40, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur white patches. And Leafbreeze, it's 4pinkbear. She's really sensitive about her name.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  04:07, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Spelling error, sorry O_O ! Am I ever going to be able to get things righ on here? I;m sorry for screwing up so much :( Does he look better? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   17:56, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Everyone makes mistakes now and again, Leaf. :) And yes, he looks better. He looks really... can you call a tom 'beautiful'? Handsome, there we go, that's better! :) Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 20:37, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hehe, thanks, Sky :) I suppose you could call a tom beautiful if it was in real life and at a cat show...Ah, well. <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   22:30, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Blur where the white meets the gray.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  21:13, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks! Better? <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   21:30, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedshadow (MC) ~ Approved
Here's Spottedshadow, the SeaClan meddy cat! Comments?  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  18:11, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

There are a few white pixels on the art. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  18:15, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  17:10, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not being cruel here, but there are still a few near her front left paw and tail. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  17:45, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Haha, you're not being cruel at all.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  20:31, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  21:01, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Dovepelt (W) ~ Approved
And Dovepelt! Comments?  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  18:11, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I see two places that just..bugs me :)

One is the eye closest to the tail, and on the front leg that is on the ground, there is some smudged lineart. <font color="blue" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">♥Love <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf♥ 21:48, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good...except for the smudged art. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  01:38, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed smudged art.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  17:11, February 19, 2011 (UTC) CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lettucepetal (W) - Approved


Here's Lettucepetal of PearlClan! I'm really happy with how she turned out. Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 15:46, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

She's beautiful, Sky! I never thought a green cat would look so natural! :) <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   15:50, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Leafbreeze! Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 15:55, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Just add depth to the eyes.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  04:07, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 20:34, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

She's beautiful! Only blur where the white meets the green on the paw.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  16:52, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Nice, but what happened with the ears? How come one is "Leaking" out, and the other has normal lineart around it.

Pardon? Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 20:44, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

The ear furthest from the tail has no bottom lineart, and it is slowly blurred into the green. The other, however, has lineart on the bottom. <span style="color:Aquamarine;font-family:Segoe Script;background:Blue;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aquamarine;">Loveleaf -.- My Talk!  20:49, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oh. S'just the way the lineart was made. If you look at the cat above, you'll see he's the same. Sky Dragons forever &amp; always! 20:53, February 20, 2011 (UTC) oh...Sorry. I'll thing I'm going to submit that idea for tweak week. <span style="color:Aquamarine;font-family:Segoe Script;background:Blue;border:1px dashed; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:Aquamarine;">Loveleaf -.- My Talk!  20:54, February 20, 2011 (UTC) CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Smokestar (L) - Approved
Here's Smokestar, the loyal leader of SeaClan. Comments?  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  18:40, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

It looks beautiful, Mistfire. It looks a little like flower petals are falling on her. Nothing I see needs work. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  19:31, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

How do get the gray to sort of blend in streaks into the tail? Surely you didn't use the fungure blur tool? I've always wonder how you guys do that... <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   22:20, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes need to be slightly blurred, but only the highights and shadings in them. You know, the rows of yellow colors. Darkfire is a very bad  kitty-thingy-mer-bobber! :D  12:46, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Phoenix: Thanks! But - it's a he :3.

Leafbreeze: I got the gray to blend in by using the smudge tool on 40-50%. It's the button that looks like the little finger.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  01:18, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, okay, I get it now! Thank you, Mistfire! <font face="Vivaldi"> ✿Leaf breeze✿   16:10, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Oh. I always get confused with the female and male blanks. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  22:05, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:27, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:14, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Finchsong - Approved
Hmm... Criticism? Comments? Mist fire  15:43, October 9, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge the mark on the hind leg, the gray marks need blurred as well as the tail. <font color="lime" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">Love <font color="Turquoise" face="Comic Sans MS" style="background:black">leaf 19:33, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Creamsplash The stars will never forget you.  22:13, November 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well? <font color="#797979" style="background:#86e4e5">Frostleaf <font color="#63c47c" >Thawed before she could blossom 01:51, November 8, 2010 (UTC)

Well, make the stripes more of a real tabby pattern, like Bumblestar's (see below). <font color="#1D6C00" style="background:#9C1414">Christmasheart 23:48, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

Finchsong has darker streaks, not tabby stripes. Mistfire Owl City! 17:24, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

This has to be either archived or approved, this has been up for a long time. &#123;&#123;SUBST:Nosubst&#124;User:Mistfire/sig}} 05:50, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Just darken the shading a bit more and she'll be ready. Ellie says; Merry Christmas!  14:29, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

She isn't really good with me; no ginger cats are. Someone else can work on this. Mist eh Wants a cupcakeh! 15:26, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

I've taken over. Comments? Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  20:53, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good 'cept there's a blurred spot on the lineart for the hind leg closest to us. Other than that, I don't see nothin' wrong. Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 21:08, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh! Pretteh! There's a bit of smudged lineart on the tail.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  22:32, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''Better? Xigbar; The Freeshooter  21:15, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Very much! But her eyes are green.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  21:25, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

They are green. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  21:42, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

They look blue... oh well, if 4pinkbear doesn't have anything to say, this should be approved.  <font color="#A1C2E3">Mistfire <font color="#A1C2E3">Spring rainfalls  22:23, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Made the eyes greener. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  01:27, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:15, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely. Luna Lovegood <font color="#191970">The Truthful, Mysterious Ravenclaw 20:26, March 31, 2011 (UTC

Mew Lavenderwolf (W) ~ For Approval
Fail shading. Can someone help with that. Otherwise, comments? Mew Mew  Zakuro  23:19, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

It looks a little...dark. I can't tell that well where the eyes come from, though the tail looks okay. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:22, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened her a bit and fixed her eyes. She's supposed to be dark gray, though. Cansomeone help with blurring the shading. I'm not sure if the new image is up, though. Mew Mew  Zakuro  23:28, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Er...no, I don't think it's up. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:32, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

It's up. I'm not lightening her. She's dark gray, and this is dark gray. Mew Mew  Zakuro  23:36, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, it looks a little better. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:40, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think the tail she be a more purplish-grey. Like this:

Use it if you want. This is only a minor tweak/suggestion. Mew Mew Ichigo I'm here to protect the Earth ~nya!  16:15, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Not to offend you, Dove, but...Destiny-san did make a pretty good one above. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  22:26, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Attempted to blur shading and changed tail color. Also altered shading and highlights on the tail to give it more texture, Luna Lovegood <font color="#191970">The Truthful, Mysterious Ravenclaw  20:05, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Just darken the black and this will be ready :) Axel;  The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:07, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

It's not supposed to be black, it's supposed to be dark gray. Luna Lovegood <font color="#191970">The Truthful, Mysterious Ravenclaw 20:21, March 31, 2011 (UTC) Oh. Sorry ^^. Alright then, CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:54, April 1, 2011 (UTC) Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  13:11, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Mew Puddingpaw (A) ~ For Approval
Her tail wasn't as good as I thought, but comments? Mew Mew  Zakuro  23:19, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it a tad more near the tail, if you can. It looks fine, otherwise. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:24, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Mew Mew   Zakuro  23:36, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Better. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 23:42, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Puddingpaw is SUCH a cute name! enlarge the earpink and brighten hi-lites.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Luna Lovegood <font color="#191970">The Truthful, Mysterious Ravenclaw 20:26, March 31, 2011 (UTC) CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  14:54, April 1, 2011 (UTC) Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  13:11, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Cricketspark (W) - For approval
All the others I have posted on here are approved, so here's Cricketspark! Prob'ly too dark, huh? Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:19, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah...too dark. No offense, Sky, but I can't see the mouth or where the outlines are. The earpink looks a little bright, but it looks fine otherwise. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 22:15, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

'''Reuploaded. '''No offense taken Phoenix! I thought she might've been too dark. Better? Sky Dragons are a girl's best friend! 20:06, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Much. Though I still can't see the mouth. Looks good otherwise. Mew Mew Phoenixfeather13--Just Chilling 22:25, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Good, but too dark.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  00:23, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

This looks fine, my Rockclaw was about this dark and it was approved. CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  02:23, April 2, 2011 (UTC) Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  13:11, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Sandfern ~ For Approval
Comments? Luna Lovegood <font color="#191970">The Truthful, Mysterious Ravenclaw 20:26, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

This is wonderful! I see nothing wrong. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:27, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  02:22, April 2, 2011 (UTC) Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  13:11, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Sunrisefeather (L)-For Approval
Kay, here's my 1st character art as an apprentice: Hope you guys like it!Cardinalfire1234 23:10, February 6, 2011 (UTC)CardinalFire1234

This looks wonderful! I've always pictured her long-haired, so change the blank. And make the scar lower, and extend partly onto her muzzle (Like this~, partly on her forehead and nose, basically.) Otherwise, looks great! Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  02:41, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

I have a suggestion: maybe we should post the pic of Saix whenever one of our members breaks the rules? Cardinalfire, your charart looks great. ♥Phoenix feather!♥  00:55, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

That'd be awesome xD. Let's take it up with the rest of the admins, to see if i'd be alright. Marluxia; The Graceful Assassin  01:56, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

It's too small, and blurry. Make the pupils thicker.  <font color="#93DBAA">Mistfire <font color="#93DBAA">Epic Fail  02:50, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

And make it a PNG file. -- <font color="#A1C2E3">Mistfire <font color="#A1C2E3">Spring rainfalls  15:47, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Photoshop won't let me make it a PNG. Cardinal <font color="Orange">fire <font color="Khaki">My fluffy yellow cake!

Would you like some help? Luna Lovegood <font color="#191970">The Truthful, Mysterious Ravenclaw 22:34, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Scratch what I just said. Here it is, totally redone.(I uploaded it at the to of this section, if that's okay). Cardinal <font color="Orange">fire <font color="Khaki">My fluffy yellow cake!

This is beautiful! CBA? Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  00:39, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Uhhhhhh, what does CBA mean? :/ Cardinal <font color="Orange">fire <font color="Khaki">My fluffy yellow cake!

Comments before approval. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  00:56, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, well done, Cardinalfire, she's beautiful! I wish I weren't so horrible at making tabby patterns :) <font face="Moonlight Shadow" size="5" color="#9EFFE7" >Unicornfrost Unicorn Head.jpg<font face="Vivaldi" size="4" color="#C20AFF">"Do you believe in magic? 14:46, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Approved. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames  20:13, April 5, 2011 (UTC)