User blog:Phoenixlight13/Fanfic Musing

I do not mean to copy Elorisa, but I had an idea for a fanfic. Here's the part of it I came up with:

Elaine moved her brown hair out of the way as she walked stiffly towards the mayor of the town. Her blue eyes flashed with calm fury. The mayor looked unconcerned that the young Master was heading towards him.

"Why?" Elaine questioned in a single word. Her pink and black kimono swayed in the wind.

"Why what?" the mayor questioned. His slicked back brown hair and menacing dark gray eyes shone in hte cloudy sunlight, his gray armor seemed almost indestructable.

"Why did you kill my brother, Chunosuke?" Elaine demanded.

"Bruno deserved it. He was not willing to pay his respects to Yami, so he was sacrificed," Chunosuke calmly responded.

"He was your apprentice! Why kill him for the sake of our so-called 'god'?" Elaine spat.

Normally, this would have made Chunosuke furious. He strongly believed Yami, the very master of his town, would be their savior. But this time, he would finally show Elaine why it was never a good idea to mock the gods.

Chunosuke soon began to transform into a horrifying beast. Large, almost butterfly-like wings sprouted from his back. His skin turned pure white, almost like fur, and claws grew from his fingers. Long, cruel fangs grew out of his mouth, until very little of his humanity was left. His eyes turned a menacing shade of gold, staring at the scared Elaine all the while.

"W-What did Yami do to you, Chunosuke?" Elaine stammered out.

"He gave me the most wonderful power. And now, I shall use it to crush you," Chunosuke answered. Before he could do so, a black kunai knife struck him down. Chunosuke howled in pain. Elaine looked behind her and saw her mentor, Hime. Her long ginger hair and brown eyes made her look like a princess, hence her name.

"Run, Elaine," Hime ordered.

"But sensei!" Elaine began to protest.

Hime shook her head. "There is no place for you now. Run, before he kills you," she ordered.

Elaine grabbed her sword and ran from her home. She refused to stop until she was safely away from the mountains and in the forest.

"Why, Hikari? Why have you forsaken us?" Elaine wailed.

Meanwhile, a hooded figure approached a small shrine. A few strands of blue hair were only visible. The shrine had a small statue of a white wolf sitting next to a black wolf and a gray wolf.

"Hikari, Yami and Kaze, the three goddesses who protect us, we need your strength now to protect Crystira from him," the hooded figure prayed.

So, was it good? ♥Phoenixfeather: The flowers are blooming...♥  20:06, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Edit: Argh, just noticed how inconsistent I was with Yami's gender. Yami is a she.

However, I think it's similar to how in the USA release of Okami, they were not specific with Okami's gender, though it's clearly implied in the game it's a stinking she. In my little post, Chunosuke references Yami as a guy numerous times, but Mr. Organization-XIII-lookalike is correct when he says "...Yami...the three goddesses who protect us..."

Also, if there are any Bleach fans on here who are up-to-date with the manga, yeah, I sorta made Chunosuke similar to Aizen's...butterfly form. Or, if you will, Butterflyzen. (Laughs at the hilarious pic for five minutes since it's too good!) If you don't know who Aizen is, here's a very short explanation: the main baddie of Bleach, he was one of the smartest guys, but when he began to power himself up, one of his transformations was a butterfy-esque form.

And what Aizen said next was drowned out by the laughter of all reading it.

Need I say more? Everyone reading Bleach expected the most terrifying transformation, and we're given a butterfly. A stinking butterfly. The previous transformation was something of a cocoon-like being, and that was no better.

If you have anymore questions, ask. ♥Phoenixfeather: The flowers are blooming...♥  23:06, April 2, 2011 (UTC)